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She is all the best a woman could ever be
I believe there's more to her than eyes can see
All her lovely aspects shine in simplicity
In and out she is radiating with beauty

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  1. Date: 2/22/2009 8:02:00 PM

    Nice, Ely. I agree with Sandra, and also, I want to say that a pair of this poem's ideas are overused, sounding like cliche's. Keep on writing. Ruben.