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Dream-M[Male]F[Female] Double verse

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Dream-M[Male]F[Female] Double verse

M-Were both dead, are souls seperate
F-I open my eyes and i feel in hell
M-I see the big golden gates with angels around
F-I see pits of fire ,demons stabbing me
M-The gates widely opeing for me
F-I see chains on me, I dont want to cry
M-I see...Theres no words to describe the beauty
F-Am i really dead..am i really in hell, baby where are you
M-I'm in heaven baby its so beautiful,so calm
F-Not here , i hear horror , screaming,yelling, chains dragging
M-I dont want to leave this pleace, I'm in love with it
F-I dont wnt to be in hell,where did i go wrong
M-Baby i wish you were here with me,where are you 
F-No,no i dont want to burn , no no help me please
M-I'm in love, I'm so free, i can fly i'm an angel

The thunder from the heavens fall
The golden gates rapidly close
Our souls run back into are body
Our eyes finally meet

F-It was only a dream,but it felt so real
M-I had a dream to,but i wish not to say
F-Baby i want to say ,i love you,i will never cheat on you
M-I love you to, i will not either
F-Hold me will you please
M-Yes, but lets go back to sleep

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