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Time and Immortal

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Time and Immortal

As I sit here,
time flys by.
I look above,
toward the sky.
And then the lightning strikes
And the dreadful angels cry.

On this night,
my valentine,
we will die,
slowly in each others arms.

And the wounds will heal
and the tears that will fall
will be nothing at all.

And then we will lay under
the ground, lovers in the
darkness until death do us part.

Then my lovely valentine
we will be forever immortal.

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  1. Date: 4/15/2010 10:08:00 AM

    ohmigosh i effing love this. its brilliant. sinister, dark, romantic. ahhhh, sweetness.