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Just A Reminder

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Just A Reminder



What does it feel like, do you feel the same Do you still have that seductive style Do you still have a soft, sweet tender young body Do you still have that come hither smile Remember it well, those many years ago Our age has surely changed us both Even if you resemble Porky Pig or Bugs Bunny No matter, I now resemble a sloth Okay, maybe that a bit of an exaggeration The Porky Pig and Bugs Bunny thing Bet you can still warble like Celine Dion Sure would like to hear my love sing “Smitten” is the word that so aptly applies To this dude with a receding hairline This elderly old duffer can still cut the mustard Can just see me as a CNN headline Okay enough is enough of this silly banter The reason I wrote this rhyme Is just a reminder that I'll love you forever And that's an extremely long time © Jack Ellison 2014

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  1. Date: 8/18/2014 11:56:00 AM
    Dragon thinks he sings like an Angel... We say words can't describe his cata-a-wallering... He thinks you wrote this just for him... And we all know that was SOOOooo nice of you... LOL.... Don't worry... I won't tell him the truth... I know you wouldn't want to break a WEE Dragon's L'll Old Heart... LOL... He DOES have a way of making everything about him... you know... Silly Dragon!

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 8/18/2014 1:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    "cata-a-wallering" never heard that before! Hope things settle down SOON there for you sweet lady! My heart is with you XOXOX
  1. Date: 8/18/2014 10:38:00 AM
    Wow fabulous write Jack ! This one is so deep n special , love doesn't age my dear friend ! Soul is young forever ! Thnx for sharing lovely poem!

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 8/18/2014 1:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You are amazing... always so supportive my dear Doctor! Thank you... XOXOX
  1. Date: 8/18/2014 7:46:00 AM
    The final part reminds me of the song the 12th of never - lovely sentiment Jack Loves you too dear brother:-) hugs Jan xxx

    Allison Avatar Jan Allison
    Date: 8/18/2014 7:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Do drop by my footles poem may make you smile :-) Hugs jan xxx
    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 8/18/2014 7:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    "And that's a very long time" a little bit of plagiarism eh! Thank you Sister Jan for those sweet words... loving hugs, Jack XOX