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Rejected Departure: You Had Me Waitin'

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Rejected Departure: You Had Me Waitin'

CHORUS:
I will squander my time now and forever
(Are you an evil, fallen angel?)
Until I meet you eye to eye again
Our departure came to soon…our future’s a blur
([sarcasm:] Oh you must be a sweet, beautiful angel –
Come on & get out of the lion’s den!
Release me…I need to let go…
Believe in me…reflect on me…
Release me…let me go with the flow
Let me grow and see…the light at the end of the tunnel
There’s other fish in the sea…

V.2:
I’m ashamed of you… 
There’s no doubt about that – 
I’m sick of you feelin’ blue…
Stop hoverin’ around me, you gnat! 
Oh, I’m still waitin’ for Your awesome Kingdom,
Though my faith and hope is paper thin… *feeling like a total disgrace*
Oh, I’m still trying to overcome these waves of emotion…causing commotion 
and making me feel numb and dumb
Where have you been? You had me waitin’… *sadface*

~!@#$%^&*()_+=-)(*&^%$#@!`~

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