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Stripping the Dream

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Stripping the Dream

dreaming of bright lights the novice actress bares all. . . in strip club neon for the "haiku on probabilities" contest of Marvin Celestial

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  1. Date: 10/2/2014 8:17:00 PM
    I saw the word stripping, so I walked in because well you know how I add photographs to my poems...so I was thinking...Never mind. I love this Haiku. Sounds like you placed in that contest.

  1. Date: 8/19/2014 10:29:00 AM
    Ok you got me with that last line-- I was not expecting that, even if your title could have been a clue-- nice twist in there, Andrea! Read your comment, thanks for the heads up, sweetie and I still owe you mail, but have to sleep now....I really did enjoy that write of yours though-- I still find it so cool how you are still able to write, whatever the contest or theme may be! hugs to you sweetie!

  1. Date: 8/11/2014 8:29:00 AM
    Congrats on ur winning witty haiku dear Andrea! Brilliant take indeed !

  1. Date: 8/9/2014 11:20:00 AM
    very likely a reality for many. nicely put, Andrea. Mohan

  1. Date: 8/9/2014 11:05:00 AM
    Is it a 'Coincidence' or by 'Design'? You next to me, up and down! Baring in neon? I am a natural guy!! Very clever write, Andrea.

  1. Date: 8/9/2014 10:01:00 AM
    This is so awesome my very dear friend Andrea. Congratulations on your win too. Its my honor sharing this win with u my dearest friend. Thank you so much for informing me about the contest, your sweet advice and d good luck from u:)))) Biggest hugs and cheers! God bless! love much, Leonora

  1. Date: 8/8/2014 10:18:00 PM
    Hmmmm.. nice pen picture, Andrea. congrats

  1. Date: 8/8/2014 8:40:00 PM
    I really liked this one. Image was one I've seen when a younger man. Congrats on the HM..

  1. Date: 8/8/2014 7:57:00 PM
    An interesting take - congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 8/8/2014 6:47:00 PM
    dropping by with my congrats Andrea:-) Hugs jan xx

  1. Date: 7/31/2014 3:04:00 PM
    probable bares all. You stuck to the challenge here. I think it's got probabilities of a winner! Hope you are good. And I do not mean that all poets are egotistical. Mostly just myself, at times. and that's who I was describing in that poem. You, definitely are not that way.

  1. Date: 7/24/2014 5:32:00 PM
    Yes, Andrea, the dream of fame has many roads. This is definitely one of them. Sad but true. Well written, my friend.... Robert.

  1. Date: 7/24/2014 7:20:00 AM
    Wishing you the best in the contest Andrea. I enjoyed reading. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/24/2014 5:52:00 AM
    Very creative! and sad too. Kudos to you for this gem.

  1. Date: 7/23/2014 7:39:00 AM
    Unfortunately for many this is a probable outcome.. Great piece sweet Andrea! Hugs.. Arlene

  1. Date: 7/22/2014 7:05:00 AM
    An illusive light in the darkness. May we all see the true light. Peace. :)

  1. Date: 7/21/2014 5:10:00 PM
    This is a clever piece! Bravo Andrea.

  1. Date: 7/21/2014 2:52:00 PM
    Very good take on the theme of the contest Andrea.Love your haiku.

  1. Date: 7/21/2014 2:45:00 PM
    Andie good luck ;) Light & Love

  1. Date: 7/21/2014 2:28:00 PM
    gawddd, so well thought off, andie.. that word ' dreaming' sets the pace for this enticing 'ku with an element of 'shift.'.. haven't done one yet.. coolio!.. huggs

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