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THE SCENT OF WATER

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THE SCENT OF WATER


We stand there mumbling side by side, 
so many words that cannot rhyme
no pathway for love to reside,
transparent is the cloak of time.
His  thoughts grow cold that interfere 
with birdsongs through each frozen pause;
that words repeat  but cannot hear
are signs why affection withdraws.

And as we trail of when and where,
the voice of fate calls from behind
misty like the scent of water;
our eyes now heavenly designed
to awaken hope beaming in gold 
as cloudscape spills warm potpourri.
And just before he turns, behold!
He renews our vows of sanctity.


Faye Gibson's The Scent Of Water Contest
7/15/2014

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  1. Date: 8/4/2014 11:14:00 PM
    lovely

  1. Date: 7/31/2014 10:10:00 AM
    Love it!

  1. Date: 7/22/2014 8:05:00 AM
    Awww!! Love this clever write, Nette! Gl in the contest, sweetie! Hugs.. Arlene

  1. Date: 7/17/2014 10:08:00 PM
    Brilliant imagery my dear lady, a very nice read that you've given me this evening I enjoyed it a lot. It has a soft flare to it thats nicely done. cheri

  1. Date: 7/17/2014 4:58:00 PM
    Another beautiful write...Love the last stanza. As clouds cape spills warm potpourri. ..you have a touch of genius!

  1. Date: 7/17/2014 8:48:00 AM
    You have taken us on a spiritual journey, in this gentle poem. One can feel the peace and the fragrance of the water. Lovely!

  1. Date: 7/17/2014 7:33:00 AM
    I love the smell of the air during a rainstorm. The potpourri metophor works very well here.

  1. Date: 7/16/2014 8:47:00 PM
    Hi Nette! Great one! Scent of Water is really beyond. It can change the mind and the reality of whoever who can savour it.

  1. Date: 7/16/2014 1:04:00 PM
    The hardest of hearts can be softened by renewed compassion. This resplendent poem mirrors that, Nette. Being part of your contest was a delightful experience; thanks much!

  1. Date: 7/16/2014 5:13:00 AM
    Your poetry is amazing Nette! It is always a pleasure to read anything you write!

  1. Date: 7/16/2014 12:35:00 AM
    Nette, It's so unfair this wand you wield.. An angel among the mortals...

  1. Date: 7/15/2014 9:58:00 PM
    Your poems are a delight, Nette, this is such a delicious read! its great to be back, I am looking forward to catching up on your work. hugs.

  1. Date: 7/15/2014 4:40:00 PM
    simply stunning Nette good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xxx

  1. Date: 7/15/2014 11:14:00 AM
    Cherishing the life we live and why we need to live it so well. Spectacular.