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Enemy Wear

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Enemy Wear

"Enemy Suit"

If you are my online styling enemy, 
Then I love you more than poop and snakes combine 
I'd pray to God, every night, 
'Ask him to fill your room with termites 
Once in a while, I'd ask him to give you grace 
In hopes today, you don't expose the green monster face 
Enough said for the time to be.

To:
My dearest enemy, my mentor
I want you to know, you taught me well
Tonight I Will Put On My Enemy's Clothes
And I'll be the fake friend that hugs you
 

Hugs, Hugs, Love, Love Linda

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  1. Date: 9/25/2014 8:13:00 PM
    Well my enemies don't call me at all...

  1. Date: 9/25/2014 8:12:00 PM
    My enemies?

  1. Date: 9/17/2014 9:32:00 PM
    Wow, To: PD the friend that hugs, love that.

  1. Date: 9/2/2014 1:39:00 PM
    the trick with edgy poetry is to still keep it beautiful sounding to the ear. You achieved that in spades.

  1. Date: 8/26/2014 5:09:00 PM
    ah yes, this is a truth of which I am aware. Take Care ... write well!

  1. Date: 7/30/2014 2:52:00 AM
    Oooo that's a good old fashioned sting in the tale if ever there was one! What a write, you nailed your point!

  1. Date: 7/28/2014 10:37:00 PM
    another 7 RATE FOR SHIGGLES AND gHITS!

  1. Date: 7/28/2014 10:35:00 PM
    I got mad love for Linda Linda my DeeStroyuh,, my enemy pretendah....This one rocks the boat and you know this> Did I ever tell you my wife in a former life's name was Linda,,,,yes Linda Bukowski is still alive, But I HanK BuK the big DukeR am dead, reincarnated, stuck as a hack writer....I wanna go back in life and Re Write Ham On Rye! & 7 rate straight up in the air on this one!

  1. Date: 6/18/2014 10:26:00 PM
    PD What a powerful and deep write. I could feel your emotions through each line, Thank you for the nice comment on my Cheating Hearts Poem.

  1. Date: 6/9/2014 10:18:00 PM
    !!!

  1. Date: 6/4/2014 12:31:00 PM
    Hi Linda. There's a lot of emotion in that ending...and throughout. I wonder if those clothes would fit me :) I've had some online experiences that are heartbreaking--fake friends? Yep.

  1. Date: 5/23/2014 7:14:00 AM
    Hi Linda hows it going Poet .D Enemies suits are pretty easy to see through its those fake and condescending ones dressed up as friends you have to weed out of there camoflauge. Liked it very nice happy writing bud have a nice weekend.Cheers Chris

  1. Date: 5/21/2014 9:46:00 PM
    Powerful diatribe! I enjoyed it. Good day and God bless!

  1. Date: 5/21/2014 3:04:00 PM
    Quite a poem, Linda; well written and stinging.

  1. Date: 5/21/2014 1:36:00 AM
    Why enemy? You offer others anything but encouragement. Nice write. Enjoyed. Tfs

  1. Date: 5/20/2014 1:38:00 PM
    It is not hard to relate, and I get what you are saying. Good job! :)

  1. Date: 5/19/2014 10:57:00 AM
    Hi Linda, You are the talented writer my friend. I enjoyed this write. Thanks for sharing this write with us. Love and Peace, Deborah

  1. Date: 5/18/2014 5:30:00 PM
    the monster thing

  1. Date: 5/18/2014 5:29:00 PM
    a good poem, sounds like a two faced thing, jekyll and hyde

  1. Date: 5/18/2014 1:57:00 PM
    Looks like a work in progress, if so please let me know since now youve got my attention, luv Carl

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