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Yellow umbrella

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Yellow umbrella

Yellow umbrella

Her drafted shape (my thought) appeared aside the cloudy rainbow,
so gracefully on ether walked; romantic apparition,
as she was holding an umbrella that was smiling yellow,
and neath the clouds she visited my mindful recognition.

Amid the mist I saw her smile, rhapsodical emission,
she flew above, inside the dew, her vernal laughter blithesome,
caressed the promises of years before, adorned contrition
the bells then rang but very far, her bright umbrella's spectrum.

And I embraced her as I should, before time's definition,
the daffodils embellishing our dusk, but not the morrow
oh, how two souls had fled along our blooming last rendition,
while that umbrella covered hence, her inward raining sorrow.

© 03-31-2014, G. Venetopoulos, All Rights Reserved
(Iambic decapentasyllabic verse)

Sponsor: Leonora Galinta
Contest Name: Poem with a theme of "Umbrella"
Deadline: 4/23/2014

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  1. Date: 6/24/2014 3:17:00 AM
    What a flow! I must admit, several words I knew not the meaning. But they are learned. Very fun to read~ Cat

  1. Date: 6/1/2014 8:00:00 AM
    soothing and beautiful poem deary bro Giorgio..how are you..hope everything is well :) take care :) sk

  1. Date: 4/16/2014 11:16:00 PM
    I enjoyed the sweep from diaphanous reverie—so ethereal yet amorphous—to my favorite "before time's definition" before the dream dissolved, like perfume's fading essence: it was and then was not. As always, most enjoyable.

  1. Date: 4/5/2014 1:30:00 PM
    An amazing write. Congratulations on the win.

  1. Date: 4/4/2014 6:24:00 PM
    Congrats on your wonderful 1st place win, Giorgio! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 4/3/2014 8:17:00 PM
    A most lovely and touching write. Big congrats on your win! Hugs

  1. Date: 4/3/2014 1:57:00 AM
    My congratulations for writing this lovely poem, enjoyed it, Giorgio

  1. Date: 4/3/2014 1:51:00 AM
    Congrats on the win - Cheers Ron

  1. Date: 4/2/2014 7:03:00 PM
    Congrats on the win, Giogio, it was a splendid write which i enjoyed very much!!

  1. Date: 4/2/2014 5:35:00 PM
    oh... :) i remember one koreanovela I watched entitles "endless love" with the girl holding a yellow umbrella while at the boat... :) the story seems like what you wrote.. :) i like how you vividly describe each composition you make sir.. :) though i need the help of internet to know some of the words... :D =olive_eloi who loves to learn with a smile :)

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V.
    Date: 4/2/2014 6:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for your kind comment, Oive Eloi! Smiles from Athens! :)
  1. Date: 4/2/2014 3:06:00 PM
    Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!! Sara

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V.
    Date: 4/2/2014 6:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey Sara! Thank you. :)
  1. Date: 4/2/2014 11:28:00 AM
    - Hey Giorgio - Congratulations on your win in "Umbrella" contest Sponsor Leonora Galinta - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V.
    Date: 4/2/2014 6:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Anne Lise. :)
  1. Date: 4/2/2014 11:16:00 AM
    Very beautiful write Giorgio; much enjoyed...and finished off so well! congrats on win. // paul

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V.
    Date: 4/2/2014 6:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Paul.
  1. Date: 4/2/2014 10:02:00 AM
    My warm and hearty congratulations on this brilliant piece and win my dear friend Giorgio ! Thank u so much for your loving support. More blessings! Biggest hugs! Love lots always, Leonora

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V.
    Date: 4/2/2014 6:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Leonora. Enter my contests. :)
  1. Date: 4/1/2014 11:53:00 AM
    oh my, what depth in those 15-syllable lines, Giorgio. And they do not flag even once as your story progresses. Lovely.

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V.
    Date: 4/1/2014 2:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Reason. :) I compose for people like you. You are an excellent poet, my friend.
  1. Date: 3/31/2014 10:13:00 AM
    very lovely poem, Giorgio.. :')) you are an idol!! ..I love your works... :'O) ...Congrats in advance!! ^_^

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V.
    Date: 3/31/2014 12:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you AiyaH. :)
  1. Date: 3/31/2014 7:26:00 AM
    Very very beautiful poem Giorgio..That umbrella that was smiling yellow/her inward raining sorrow..Loved it.

    A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V.
    Date: 3/31/2014 12:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Charm. :)