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Transcendent Beauty

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Transcendent Beauty

I waited for her for so many years
She lived within my imagination
When I first saw her I was breathless
She was beyond any expectation

She lived within my imagination
Until the day she stepped into my life
She was beyond any expectation
I've come to realize dreams do come true

Until the day she stepped into my life
There were so many doubts within my mind
I've come to learn that dreams do come true
Dreams sometimes happen when we are awake

There were so many doubts within my mind
I was unsure of how to live this life
Dreams sometimes happen when we are awake
My life began with her angelic smile

I was unsure of how to live this life
Somehow it seemed like living in a fog
My life began with her angelic smile
Eternity dwells with in her beauty

Somehow it seemed like living in a fog
When I first saw her I was breathless
Eternity dwells within her beauty
I waited for her for so many years

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  1. Date: 3/21/2014 7:32:00 AM
    I love how you keep the feeling and emotion within your formatting Rick; this is a beautiful work. But not beyond any expectation of you ;) You are a pro at it after all!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 3/21/2014 8:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    What a nice thing to say Flo. You just made my morning.
  1. Date: 3/14/2014 7:59:00 PM
    What a true romantic you are Richard. This is very beautiful!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 3/15/2014 3:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Connie you are kind.
  1. Date: 3/14/2014 7:47:00 AM
    Such lovely romantic poetry for your wife. Your love for her leaps from the page.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 3/14/2014 8:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    She has caused my heart to jump for 22years.
  1. Date: 3/13/2014 7:11:00 PM
    Awesome poem you have here

    JT Avatar Honestly JT
    Date: 3/14/2014 11:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    JT
    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 3/14/2014 8:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Honestly, can I call you Honesty for short?
  1. Date: 3/13/2014 1:50:00 AM
    Gorgeous work, and a wonderful dedication. I think its the most beautiful thing when a man writes poetry for his woman, that's the ultimate!!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 3/13/2014 7:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Bindu, I just want her to know how much she is appreciated.
  1. Date: 3/13/2014 1:06:00 AM
    wonderful poem Richard, the poem gave its self eternal beauty. Very touching... Linda

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 3/13/2014 7:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Linda, I am happy to see you are back. Thanks for the thoughtful comment.
  1. Date: 3/12/2014 11:45:00 PM
    This is surely a terrific Pantoum, you have come a long way from your first attempt of this form! This is a very awesome write my friend! You have created a romantic poem deep within this poem! I really enjoyed reading this delightful piece this evening! What a lovely poem, Great work!!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 3/13/2014 7:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    What a nice thing to say Russel, I appreciate it.
  1. Date: 3/12/2014 11:09:00 PM
    I want to try one of these Pantoums.. Richard, you keep pushing the envelop.. I admire !

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 3/13/2014 7:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks David, if you do please let me know, I would love to read it.
  1. Date: 3/12/2014 6:30:00 PM
    I'm sure she was worth the wait Richard, loved your skillfully written Pantoum I lika dat xxx

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 3/13/2014 7:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Rose you are sweet
  1. Date: 3/12/2014 4:52:00 PM
    Eternity dwells within her beauty-What an awesome verse../Dreams sometimes happen when We are awake,Thiose waking dreams are the best in my opinion./So many beautiful verses..guving me a feeling of fluttering wings upon your shoulder.

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 3/13/2014 9:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Good morning to you too Richard : )
    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 3/12/2014 4:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Wow! It is so cool being quoted! Thanks Charmaine.
  1. Date: 3/12/2014 4:43:00 PM
    Awwwww....full and sweet...quite a treat...it can't be beat! Ok...that was cheesy, but this is a lovely poem! :) Angelic smiles will do that to someone!

    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 3/12/2014 4:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    What sweet thing to say.......Thanks, Richard.
    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 3/12/2014 4:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I am sure you have broken a few hearts with your angelic smile.
  1. Date: 3/12/2014 4:27:00 PM
    Nicely penned Richard!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 3/12/2014 4:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Ken
    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 3/12/2014 4:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Shadow, sorry you are getting so many messages. Each time I tried to post for Eileen it posted to yours. Thanks for commenting Shadow. Hugs Rick
  1. Date: 3/12/2014 4:19:00 PM
    full of feelings and very romantic write Rick hugs

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 3/12/2014 4:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Eileen, see message to you below.
    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 3/12/2014 4:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    The soup is doing weird things, the above message was for you Eileen.
    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 3/12/2014 4:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Eileen, Thanks for the positive comment. have another look I am now finished writing it. Hugs Rick
  1. Date: 3/12/2014 4:19:00 PM
    OH WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Isn't this a beauty! Your sweetie will love it. Hmmmmmm....it doesn't get much better than to have someone write poetry about you. She's a lucky lady. Great write, Richard....as always....