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FREEDOM BLUES

Cyndi MacMillan Avatar Cyndi MacMillan - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail Go to Poets Blog Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled FREEDOM BLUES which was written by poet Cyndi MacMillan. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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FREEDOM BLUES


Gone, one sliver of affection,
each cold look, a rough correction,
even vows can bruise.

Comes a day of independence,
each gained mile an ole fear lessens... 
she hums freedom blues.

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  1. Date: 3/30/2014 4:38:00 PM
    Cyndi, Congratulations, on your win... Always & Forever...... Linda

  1. Date: 3/27/2014 4:54:00 PM
    Yup all things come with a price. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 3/25/2014 11:23:00 AM
    Ahh!! Great quality poetry!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 3/25/2014 12:36:00 AM
    Very lovely poem. Congratulations on a fine win, cyndi

  1. Date: 3/24/2014 6:57:00 PM
    Hope she keeps humming. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 3/24/2014 6:23:00 PM
    It reads even better the second time. Congrats on your win. Ron

  1. Date: 3/24/2014 5:38:00 PM
    wow, you did a serious and deep one using simple rhyme scheme. Not so easy to accomplish.Congrats on a well deserved win, Cyndi.

  1. Date: 3/24/2014 3:10:00 PM
    hey there, soul sis... a brave, low-boil yet heated write... oh my, congrst!.. hoa are you, novelist?.. hugggs

    onclaud Avatar nette onclaud
    Date: 3/24/2014 3:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    take 2: oh my, congrats!.. how are you, novelist?.. lol.. my outbox button isn't working, arrgh TPS!.. :)
  1. Date: 3/24/2014 2:19:00 PM
    The good with the bad, lookin' on the bright side. Yeah. Congrats Cindi.

  1. Date: 3/24/2014 12:50:00 PM
    Cyndi.. Saw this coming.. Congrats on your big win!

  1. Date: 3/13/2014 2:24:00 PM
    When the mirror finally reflects this image unto him, it will be catastrophic. This bird will leave the cage free and living. Swirl, you do not play when it comes content! Muahhh

    Papyri Avatar Fiery Papyri
    Date: 3/13/2014 2:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I have to re-post 'Elements' because i'm into plagarism 8 )
  1. Date: 3/12/2014 4:47:00 PM
    Soup Mail!!

  1. Date: 3/11/2014 9:29:00 PM
    Song is in these words.. A good one too!