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  1. Date: 3/17/2014 5:46:00 PM
    F.J., This poem is simply beautiful, it takes you through all the seasons of life in such a poetic fashion...I just love it...I also want to congratulate you on being a lifetime premium member...God bless you as you continue to write... :~)

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 3/18/2014 7:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much Cinda; still loving your avatar ;)
  1. Date: 3/4/2014 6:38:00 AM
    Yip you blew this one out of the waters with grace and prowess. I applaud your effort here. Excellent!

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 3/4/2014 9:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    M it's been a while :) Hope you're doing well. Thank you.
  1. Date: 3/4/2014 12:17:00 AM
    You swept me gracefully along with such graceful lines and apt metaphors. A delight to read you again.

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 3/4/2014 9:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Good morning Mark! How lovely to 'see' you :) Thank you very much Mark.
  1. Date: 3/3/2014 2:49:00 PM
    Hi ..This is so so beautiful.. Im glad I stopped by sweet Flo.Hope you are fine-Hugs

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 3/4/2014 9:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    They will be Lady ;) Always glad to see my friend visit me; thanks Charma.
  1. Date: 3/3/2014 2:45:00 PM
    It is such a joy to follow your mind in your words. So unpredictable which is very much a pleasure :)

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 3/4/2014 9:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    A new ID I see; a fitting one at that. Thank you Greg.
  1. Date: 3/3/2014 2:35:00 PM
    Good afternoon Flo. Came by looking for a new poem. I hope all is well in your world. Hugs Rick.

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 3/4/2014 9:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for checking Rick; just a bit overwhelmed at the moment ;) I'll be back before you know it.
  1. Date: 3/1/2014 3:20:00 PM
    I can see why so many are praising this wondrous piece. Outstanding work Flo!

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 3/2/2014 12:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Oh wow thanks Rick! Didn't know any were. Lol
  1. Date: 3/1/2014 3:42:00 AM
    my, flo.. a portrait of your seasons sparked by wondrous images of your own charmed existence...just lovely!.. huggs

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 3/2/2014 12:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Nette how beautiful. Thank you.
  1. Date: 3/1/2014 12:25:00 AM
    Once again you have excelled yourself F.J. what a beautiful write, that I could sit and read for hours, loved it. Love to you and girls..Vera.....

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 3/2/2014 12:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks so much Vera. You know I see "your girls" and I'm smiling ear to ear! Lol
  1. Date: 2/28/2014 5:10:00 PM
    Wonderful poem FJ. really lovely the way it's woven together. Really enjoyed this read. Hope it's a win for you....Peter

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 2/28/2014 5:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey Peter!! I'm glad you like it. Thank you =)
  1. Date: 2/28/2014 4:30:00 PM
    so exquisitely beautiful and well expressed FJ great pen gl in contest hugs

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 2/28/2014 5:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Aww Shadow thanks so much.
  1. Date: 2/28/2014 2:16:00 PM
    Hi there, solid metaphors here, Doll. Much enjoyed the tone, intensity. Fave line... adding to earth's ribbons. I love that freshness! Cheers, happy weekend to you, Cyndi

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 2/28/2014 5:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you ma'am! A refreshing visit from you dear Cyndi.
  1. Date: 2/28/2014 12:34:00 PM
    Simply classic F.J.T,no doubt you are on top of it.I really love this,kudos.

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 2/28/2014 12:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey K!! Thanks for the shot of encouragement!
  1. Date: 2/28/2014 12:22:00 PM
    Loved the poem but please be careful. Those bee's have their own lawyer now. Haven't you seen the bee movie ?

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 2/28/2014 12:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    LOL!! No D I missed that one! Thanks Daz ;)
  1. Date: 2/28/2014 12:08:00 PM
    Well penned Flo...I especially like the 2nd stanza..

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 2/28/2014 12:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks J. Spring and Summer were the easiest to put down...the other two gave me a headache! Lol
  1. Date: 2/28/2014 12:02:00 PM
    Dear F.J.: Congratulations on this beautiful poem. Deeply thought and well written piece. Also thanks for the comment on my poem In Fantasy Land. I am very well. Just taking some time to research some new inspiration poems. Thanks again and keep up the beautiful work. Neva

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 2/28/2014 12:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Neva. I hope it works out well. Sounds like a great idea. :) And I still need directions to your Fantasy Land! Lol
  1. Date: 2/28/2014 11:30:00 AM
    Absolutely brilliant. Thanks for making my day. I have found it pleasurable to always begin the weekend with Poetrysoup because poets like you and poems like this do not disappoint. Have a lovely weekend

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 2/28/2014 11:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you.
  1. Date: 2/28/2014 10:33:00 AM
    F.J. a very good trip through seasonal memories...though wouldn't it be 'bees swarm to your queen' ...still like it though...David

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 2/28/2014 11:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hm...I forgot it also threw off the suggested 'bears running to their caverns so I need think about this one a little more.
    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 2/28/2014 11:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Lol I thought of that David; but often they're not going in swarms to the Queen so I figured I'd just stick with "run" but maybe I'll change it to fly ;)
  1. Date: 2/28/2014 1:07:00 AM
    Gripping & tense atmosphere. A battle again Mother Nature, it seems. Damn.

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 2/28/2014 9:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Lol you caught that did you?!! Thanks Drakezes
  1. Date: 2/28/2014 12:34:00 AM
    Absolutely gorgeous imagery. :D

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 2/28/2014 9:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey there AE! Thank you
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