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  1. Date: 3/19/2014 9:52:00 AM
    Hi Congrats on your placement. Very well penned. Particularly liked the last line. All the best in your future endeavors. xx

  1. Date: 3/17/2014 11:45:00 AM
    Excellent poem my lovely friend. Congrats on your win. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 3/16/2014 5:52:00 PM
    just stopping by to say hi, David. hope things are going well in your life!

  1. Date: 3/15/2014 8:03:00 AM
    Congrats on your win David

  1. Date: 3/15/2014 2:13:00 AM
    Congratulations on the fine with beautiful sonnet, david

  1. Date: 3/15/2014 1:13:00 AM
    David, Congratulations, on your Hunt for a Sonnet Gem. Awesomely done. ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 3/14/2014 10:12:00 PM
    David, beautifully written open heart.. Thank you for letting us see. Congrats on the Win!

  1. Date: 3/14/2014 10:22:00 AM
    So sad... but beautifully written... with such feeling...I'm truly Sorry for your loss...

  1. Date: 3/13/2014 12:53:00 AM
    David, why would you remove all your poems? WHY? makes me sad! :( soup mail...TEX

  1. Date: 3/12/2014 7:26:00 PM
    Life goes and lives on! Where there's life, there's death! Memories DO fade as time pass however they do linger like they're stored away somewhere where noone can steal. I love the emotion portrayed here!

  1. Date: 3/1/2014 6:55:00 AM
    This is one of your gems, although you have many of those !! It flows so well and the emotion-- even behind the hidden meanings, are so breathtaking Xx~Xx

  1. Date: 2/26/2014 3:06:00 AM
    Still love that last line. Saved in favs ready for tweeting. Will be in touch.

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    Date: 2/28/2014 4:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Bloody internet has slowed down. Oh well off we go. You are first cab off the rank, drive safely. To Tweet... As I said to F.J. feel free with your retweet finger.
  1. Date: 2/23/2014 11:24:00 PM
    The last two lines are very strong and true. Loved always, my friend, bl

  1. Date: 2/23/2014 5:35:00 AM
    This poem in particular spoke to me, David, "memories linger like forgotten dreams" to often this is reality...sometimes it is also a blessing although we may not see it at the time. Above all keep those "cherished moment frozen in time" cheers Huberta

  1. Date: 2/9/2014 8:52:00 PM
    Yes David it does bring a tear..close to spilling...lovely!

  1. Date: 2/8/2014 12:38:00 AM
    Hi David, I have to say, I loved this poem even more than than the first read, this is a 7 for sure!!!!

  1. Date: 2/6/2014 4:15:00 PM
    Oh yes, I can relate to this one, David, indeed I can. Dottie was mine's name.

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  1. Date: 2/4/2014 10:03:00 PM
    Awesome lines and very strong emotions, well written !

  1. Date: 2/4/2014 3:30:00 PM
    DAvid, did you ever post the one that was for Deb's contest?