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Romeos Demise

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Romeos Demise

Thy love, it falleth soft on tulle Thy breath of morning, blushes me For I am not, no longer free Tis ire, refusing to unspool Oh suffereth long, thine owns a fool; Ay Sire, mine eyes abroach thy glee And pulleth brine, by Baltic Sea Tis Juliet, thy faithful fool Who knows not wise nor circumvent The meaning of thy ration, lost Forbidden by the Trident of his Spear Like Maids of old, no oft consent Of soul’s empire, or faithful Joust Up close, direct, it pierces, HERE! January 29, 2014 For contest: Italian Sonnet

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  1. Date: 3/1/2014 7:19:00 PM

    Ah, such sad loss, very well told, Mystic Rose

  1. Date: 2/10/2014 6:05:00 PM

    This is beautiful Rose....congratulations on your featured poem..:-) :-)

  1. Date: 2/2/2014 12:09:00 PM

    gosh, how were you able to make it sound like such old English? you created quite the classic sounding sonnet, my friend. I gotta check this contest out!!! I think Isaiah is gonna love yours.

  1. Date: 1/31/2014 11:22:00 AM

    ravishing are thy words, maiden fair... blossometh more i must declare... a gem of a work, dear vie.. the bard must be beaming at you.. huggs!

  1. Date: 1/31/2014 8:03:00 AM

    This beautiful, classical language flows from your pen as if were your native tongue.

  1. Date: 1/31/2014 3:12:00 AM

    Gadzooks sweet maid , this tribute in thy ancient tongue glisters like gold. Love looks not with the eyes but with the mind . Thank you.

  1. Date: 1/30/2014 9:49:00 PM

    Baltic Sea? Geographically, that is nowhere near Venice, Italy where Shakespeare's play was set. Nevertheless, this is a nicely written Italian sonnet.

  1. Date: 1/30/2014 9:04:00 PM

    Hopeing for the sweetest of dreams for the sweetest of ladies nite, mystic. love always cheri

  1. Date: 1/30/2014 6:54:00 PM

    Love this my sweet mystic maji it is has such a flavor of the olden world of yesterday's romantic world. how are you tonight my lady. hope you and yours are well, it is very cold here, cheri

  1. Date: 1/30/2014 7:36:00 AM

    - M.R. a beautiful poem that will reach high on the winning list - well done as always!! - Good luck! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 1/29/2014 10:12:00 PM

    WOW! You have masterfully written a winning write here my friend! I surely loved reading this amazing poem this evening! What an outstanding and magnificent piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 1/29/2014 5:17:00 PM

    An impressive write, good luck in the contest

  1. Date: 1/29/2014 4:06:00 PM

    Wow, what a very Shakespearian kind of poem! haha! A very great write, oh my darling Mystic, you never fail me with all your creative and clever and romantic and beautiful writes! Good Luck in the contest, hope you win big! :) xoxo hugs and kisses P.S. I don't think you'll need too much luck, I can see this poem winning 1st place already! :)

  1. Date: 1/29/2014 1:51:00 PM

    You Make Me Smile Baby Girl! "Tis Juliet, Thy Faithful Fool." ~ Your Beauty, Stirs The Heart A Timeless Truth, To Lift You High In Tethered Spools, Unfurl Your Love This Love, As Two ~ My Love, Always, John

  1. Date: 1/29/2014 1:14:00 PM

    you take me there, vie... again, you heart follows your flow in old englsh time... enthralling!.. huggs

  1. Date: 1/29/2014 12:06:00 PM

    Beautiful! I wish the best of luck in the contest! 7 G.

  1. Date: 1/29/2014 11:59:00 AM

    Dearest little magi, my friend getting ready to post three new works let me know what you think please. cheri