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Love Is a Joyous Promise

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Love Is a Joyous Promise

As the nightingale sings so do I follow.
I'm filled up with joy and no longer hollow.

When the day lights up or the dark does fall
the weight's been lifted and I'm ten feet tall !

This face I see always in my dreams
is just as beautiful as it seems.

Love like this is just why I prayed;
in the eve's half-light it's why I stayed.

Day's slipped away and night lies glistening.
In the fields of my heart I'm quietly listening.

There's a sound like peace and passion like thunder.
This love's a fine spell I've been put under.

We'll traverse this world together-then sleep.
Now devotion's a promise we both can keep.

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  1. Date: 2/11/2014 3:17:00 PM
    so beautiful Deb great pen hugs

  1. Date: 1/29/2014 8:58:00 PM
    just look at you shimmering through the flicker of love... what a gem ,deb!.. hugggs

  1. Date: 1/24/2014 10:10:00 AM
    Very nice rhyme and flow. I loved reading this....Hugs....Roger

  1. Date: 1/23/2014 3:04:00 PM
    Hi Deb. This is a lovely! So lovely in every way......I agree with Caleb....That line also spoke to me the most. Love like this is hard to find. Enjoy every moment of it.

  1. Date: 1/23/2014 1:18:00 PM
    This is quite lovely, Deb. So many good lines and the flow is excellent. My fave is..."in the fields of my heart I'm quietly listening"

  1. Date: 1/23/2014 6:38:00 AM
    This is quite the beautiful write my friend! I truly enjoyed reading this enlightening and lovely poem this morning! What a glorious piece, such a fantastic poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 1/23/2014 4:46:00 AM
    - A beautiful poem, Deb!! - The promises are "saints"- Have a nice day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)