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Snow flakes

Snow flakes

Close your eyes

You see millions of snow flakes begin 
to fall down to our heart

See?

As it goes ,
Your sadness , anger , hatred and 
desperate feeling are like being covered 
with the flakes.

Little by little

Anymore ,
You can never see anything  
except for the silver snow

Well ,why don't we stop hating each other 
and just stay together?

Please forgive me
We could make it for tonight 
Only for tonight

 Please see this snow fall
Everything is like just being cured 
little by little 

You see much of silver snow enough
to make another world 

We could build a castle 

If failed,
We can do it from the beginning
Since we are not alone

Little by little

You give me power ,
Your smile fulfills my heart with
Joy , happiness and good feelings.

And ,How happy to know that
We can do this together

Please stay with me
We can go further more
changing anything

If failed,
We can do it from the beginning
Since we are together

And Hand in hand
Let's walk in the snow field
Only for tonight

Under the snow fall

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  1. Date: 4/27/2013 6:21:00 AM
    dynamic words, dynamic soul

  1. Date: 8/18/2012 1:55:00 PM
    Your poem is very beautiful! It is very "Japanese", I don't know how to explain. :) The snow images, a feeling of alienation, and the hopeful fight for love, that is very Japanese. My favourite is the line: "You see much of silver snow enough to make another world". Please write more poems, I will enjoy reading! ??????????!