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I, enter her

Basking in afterglows’ alliterated whisper

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Time
Speaks
Silence

Its arms, fatig
                       u
                              e
                                         d.

Chocolate retinas
Emerald pupils
Forging concentrated grips on flesh

Her moistened elasticity
Enters unknown heights through thrusting, collapsing gasp

She didn’t really know me, until now.

Exacerbated ripple effects
Affection learning its place
Amongst wanton, disciplinary penetrations

Cravings become reflection’s identity, undone

Look unto me
Beyond sanctuary’s dominant palm
Grasping for oxygenated reasoning

Let me dive unto you.

Butterfly strokes towards solidarity’s deep end
Inches towards reality check’s surrender

Turn me into your addictions

Replicate
Dominate
Subjugate
Our tongue’s slow dance towards seductive sonnets

Ride my lustful portrayals beyond stratospheric blue
And prepare yourself

For round 2

©Drake J. Eszes

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  1. Date: 8/29/2014 8:19:00 AM
    Had to come back for a good dose of round 2! ;) Hugs

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 8/29/2014 8:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Rreow!!! :D Love it! Thank you so much, Eileen!
  1. Date: 3/14/2014 8:14:00 AM
    wow. i ilke. very.

  1. Date: 2/14/2014 9:36:00 AM
    I enjoyed reading this one again. Have a great day Drake.

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 2/14/2014 3:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Many thanks, Richard!!!!!
  1. Date: 2/9/2014 12:07:00 PM
    Oh dang Drake this hot lil' number will definitely get ones thoughts warm with the sensuality that flows down the page hon'! Loved it!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 2/9/2014 12:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    That was the plan, yes. :) Thank you so much, Mary Jo!
  1. Date: 2/5/2014 6:24:00 AM
    ooooooooo Me bow down for this one. From the title to Round 2..damn you Drake. i wanna be you and your pen RIGHT now. Dope and sick poem with no doctor's note hahahaha.

    Ngomane Avatar Raymond Ngomane
    Date: 2/5/2014 8:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Give thanks Drake LOL
    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 2/5/2014 8:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    LOL!!! Love it man! You rock with the commentary. Many thanks!
  1. Date: 2/3/2014 9:08:00 PM
    I've told ya this old lady has a stroke over these poems of yours!!!! But......oh so worth it..:-) :-) :-) :-) after 3 weeks of the flu..just what I needed....:-) thanks...

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 2/3/2014 9:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    LOL! You're alive! YAAAAAY!!!!! Welcome back to Earth, Donna. =D Thank you my dear!
  1. Date: 1/31/2014 5:10:00 PM
    Ooh la la. Candid, seductive, sensual. I love what you did with the word "fatigued" and I love your writing style!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 1/31/2014 11:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I admire all those words you just used, for sure. That means a lot, thank you very much, Juliet!
  1. Date: 1/31/2014 11:24:00 AM
    This is definitely a Burner!! I love your word play!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 1/31/2014 10:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey man! Good, my mission is accomplished. :) Cheers sir! Thanks so much!
  1. Date: 1/29/2014 8:15:00 PM
    Love the way it was written, the style, and the emotion it produced. Definitely gave me great images in my head lol. I also wrote something similar. 7!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 1/29/2014 11:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey Kira! That's awesome of you. I do appreciate you stopping by. =D
  1. Date: 1/29/2014 2:48:00 PM
    I'm having as much fun reading the comments left below, as I am in reading this fire-cracker poem of yours!! My computer screen was smoking, my keyboard was hot to the touch, and I kept thinking my computer had some kind of outrageous virus! And all the time, it was just your poem !!...(I was almost ready to dial 911 for Pete's sake!! Holy Moly...... I don't think my computer could handle round 2 !!! LOL>.....

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 1/29/2014 11:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    LMAO! Absolutely hilarious, Carrie! You made my evening. =D
  1. Date: 1/29/2014 5:20:00 AM
    I am absolutely terrified of writing something like this, and damn, you did amazingly. I admire the creative writing of the erotic and sensual--I am also intrigued by the beginning. Setting up a very different mood. And the way you constructed fatigued really brang your poem to life as opposed to weakening it. Gosh, I don't know what I'm saying anymore. All I know is its 3 something in the morning and I'm wide awake. : ) Great one Drake. As I said before, I love your work. Always, Laura

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 1/29/2014 7:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I think it's very clear on what you said and I'm deeply grateful for it. There's something to be said about 3am expressions, something extra intense about it. I like! So, going forward, 3am comments from you only. Go! ;-) But, truly, thank you so much! You shouldn't be afraid to write something like this. We're human. We're allowed to. You'd be insanely awesome if you did, Laura. I already know it!
  1. Date: 1/27/2014 10:35:00 PM
    This one I understand! Walking that fine line between erotic and raunchy. I love it... Jack

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 1/27/2014 10:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    HA! Sometimes, you gotta take it there. =D And AWESOME that you grasped this! WOO HOO! Thanks, Jack!!!
  1. Date: 1/24/2014 6:44:00 PM
    So how many rounds did you go? I hope she wore you out! Mostly I hope you were the last man standin *lol*

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 1/24/2014 8:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    HAHAHAAAA! No confirmations or denials. =D Cheers, Richard!
  1. Date: 1/24/2014 3:47:00 PM
    What a great poem. Its nice reading your piece once again. Keep on writing please.

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 1/24/2014 8:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Funom!
  1. Date: 1/24/2014 2:32:00 PM
    My blood pressure has just reached stratospheric heights, you ought to be illegal Drake Eszes, when you right like this, I like it I like it, SMILE xxx

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 1/24/2014 8:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    LOL! This was the most hilarious comment today. Thank you so much for that, Vie. =D
  1. Date: 1/24/2014 7:05:00 AM
    Basking in afterglows aliterated whispers...I love the hush hush atmosphere this line creates.. Then to thrust..to grasp...someone one got to know deeper... Another beautiful feeling... Who needs more than sensuality and passion..When the silent cherry on the cake shouts Love.?? Sensual,classic and amorous post Drake.

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 1/24/2014 8:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    A truly invigorating comment, Charmaine. Seriously. Thank you so so much for that. =D
  1. Date: 1/23/2014 9:14:00 PM
    Line 1speaks of the blessings of love, so beautifully displayed in this poem from your heart, my friend! May God's Love continue to shine through the special gifts you kindly share...jimbo

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 1/23/2014 10:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Spot on with that perspective! The same to you, Jimbo!!! =D
  1. Date: 1/23/2014 12:48:00 AM
    Sir Drake, such a sensuous view into the intimacy and passion of love and lust. An expressive write masterfully written. "Turn me into your addictions" An exquisite line my friend. Congratulations!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 1/23/2014 10:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey Sarai! I seriously appreciate that! =D Thank you very much!
  1. Date: 1/22/2014 7:39:00 PM
    "disciplinary penetrations" was as far as i got. and that was enough to....

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 1/23/2014 10:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    LOL! Nice man! Nice. =D Thanks, John!
  1. Date: 1/21/2014 11:38:00 PM
    Replicate Dominate Subjugate? What are you saying Drake? Bev

    Crespo Avatar Beverly Crespo
    Date: 1/23/2014 11:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I was being humorous.
    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 1/23/2014 10:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Oh, well, ok then! :)
    Crespo Avatar Beverly Crespo
    Date: 1/22/2014 1:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I know.
    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 1/22/2014 12:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Don't hold back. That's what I'm saying. :)
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