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  1. Date: 3/16/2015 8:39:00 AM
    Hi Bindu! What a great introductory line to this totally awesome poem! Those who experience love and its sweet and sour effects will surely relate to these expressive words. A top rating for a touching offering! hugs // paul

  1. Date: 12/5/2014 11:02:00 AM
    Love the imagery. Great write! Very inspirational words... Thanks for the lovely compliment on my writing as well. It's been a while since I've written I promise to post another soon. ;) Cheers! Happy Holidays to you & your family - Dark

  1. Date: 11/7/2014 2:10:00 AM
    A very deep Poem. I suppose life can sometimes be or feel like a cycle, it's like we take 5 step forward and 10 step backwards and Love is pain. Well written Bindu God bless and take care!

  1. Date: 9/29/2014 7:31:00 PM
    The strata of your passions oh how they flirt and fasten the heart, the tangle of tantilizing trysts are risks hard to resist Bindu. There is such a tangible intensity in this poem, tingled mystety too. I love the expression, " Lust's virulent grip..." J.A.B.

  1. Date: 9/21/2014 5:38:00 PM
    touching deeply beautifully painted bindu god bless

  1. Date: 3/2/2014 4:19:00 PM
    Sometimes, there seems to be a cycle with love and relationship. No matter how hard we try, we always end up in the same places, with the same empty void. This is another amazing and awesome poem, Bindu! I am always fascinated by your writing! ...Thank you for stopping by my poems and leaving such kind comments. :)

  1. Date: 2/19/2014 5:42:00 AM
    love this enthralling write Bindu super pen hugs

  1. Date: 2/3/2014 11:02:00 AM
    "Obsessive yearning threaded through insomniac nights"—Yes, as writers, this is fuel for writing. A list of reality's truths are laid out in this piece. Bravo, Poet!

  1. Date: 2/3/2014 9:03:00 AM everyone else I think this is exceptional....powerful yet somehow a tint of loneliness.... you are awesome..thanks so much for your inspiring visits also..

  1. Date: 1/31/2014 8:18:00 AM
    You penned a rollercoaster of emotions following the 'pagan cycles' of your poem. I love the opening words, "Silence shuddered". It set the tone for the poem.

  1. Date: 1/30/2014 11:43:00 PM
    Wow Bindu what a first line to start off such a brilliant poem! Wow this poem got to me, and the ending what an ending line! This poem is brilliant and I love it! Great write Bindu! :) xoxoxo

  1. Date: 1/30/2014 8:03:00 PM
    Interesting write so full of emotion yet it's sadness wants me to give you a hug and say it's ok my friend. great job on the whole set up for it's mood though. cheri

  1. Date: 1/30/2014 4:16:00 PM
    Your poetry is always so great at setting a mood. Lust's virulent grip. Wow!!

  1. Date: 1/30/2014 6:45:00 AM
    You describe the void of a missing lover so well here Bindu, you're up to your usual high standard good girl, xxx

  1. Date: 1/29/2014 1:50:00 PM
    bindu, my dear.. hope to read ou soon.. missing you!.. huggs

  1. Date: 1/29/2014 9:39:00 AM
    Wow,i dont get around much lately,,,,but this is sensational Bindu,, you are truly a wondrous poet....

  1. Date: 1/27/2014 2:41:00 PM
    enticing the senses in an earthy way, dear bindu.. a languis yet terrific wrk so well done... huggs

  1. Date: 1/27/2014 12:37:00 PM
    This made me smile. Your words flow so well. I'd like to add you to my favorite poets :)

  1. Date: 1/26/2014 12:45:00 PM
    - Fantastic and skillfully written, dear Bindu !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 1/26/2014 12:34:00 PM
    Bindu excellent piece of work...David