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Void

Silence shuddered in night’s deceptive arms
As memories rose and fell to insane rhythms
There was bliss that smiled for a fleeting lifetime
Which morphed to a viper’s coil spewing rage
At neglect of an absent lover’s selfish memory

Obsessive yearning threaded through insomniac nights
Patterned in the ebb and rush of latent desires
Needs to be met from hasty promises 
Hollowed to fruition at lust’s virulent grip

Trysts in creation pulsing their pagan cycles
Scents of life, of a most guarded saga..

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  1. Date: 9/29/2014 7:31:00 PM
    The strata of your passions oh how they flirt and fasten the heart, the tangle of tantilizing trysts are risks hard to resist Bindu. There is such a tangible intensity in this poem, tingled mystety too. I love the expression, " Lust's virulent grip..." J.A.B.

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan
    Date: 9/29/2014 10:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    That's life, isn't it? the myriad passions that a soul can get tangled in? every phase, and every moment of this life is so precious, packed with valuable lessons. and when we evolve into the universal love is when we look back and smile thinking woah, how can I have had such base moments when it was all so easy and enjoyable and didn't necessarily had to be so painful:)
  1. Date: 9/21/2014 5:38:00 PM
    touching deeply beautifully painted bindu god bless

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan
    Date: 9/29/2014 10:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thankyou, Liam:)
  1. Date: 3/2/2014 4:19:00 PM
    Sometimes, there seems to be a cycle with love and relationship. No matter how hard we try, we always end up in the same places, with the same empty void. This is another amazing and awesome poem, Bindu! I am always fascinated by your writing! ...Thank you for stopping by my poems and leaving such kind comments. :)

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan
    Date: 3/3/2014 2:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Wow, thank you, dear Kelly, what a sweet comment:)
  1. Date: 2/19/2014 5:42:00 AM
    love this enthralling write Bindu super pen hugs

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan
    Date: 3/3/2014 2:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, dear Shadow:) hugs!
  1. Date: 2/3/2014 11:02:00 AM
    "Obsessive yearning threaded through insomniac nights"—Yes, as writers, this is fuel for writing. A list of reality's truths are laid out in this piece. Bravo, Poet!

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan
    Date: 2/4/2014 3:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Dah!
  1. Date: 2/3/2014 9:03:00 AM
    Bindu...like everyone else I think this is exceptional....powerful yet somehow a tint of loneliness.... you are awesome..thanks so much for your inspiring visits also..

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan
    Date: 2/4/2014 3:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Donna:)
  1. Date: 1/31/2014 8:18:00 AM
    You penned a rollercoaster of emotions following the 'pagan cycles' of your poem. I love the opening words, "Silence shuddered". It set the tone for the poem.

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan
    Date: 1/31/2014 9:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Monterey:) I always look forward to your visits.
  1. Date: 1/30/2014 11:43:00 PM
    Wow Bindu what a first line to start off such a brilliant poem! Wow this poem got to me, and the ending what an ending line! This poem is brilliant and I love it! Great write Bindu! :) xoxoxo

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan
    Date: 1/31/2014 9:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Chris!
  1. Date: 1/30/2014 8:03:00 PM
    Interesting write so full of emotion yet it's sadness wants me to give you a hug and say it's ok my friend. great job on the whole set up for it's mood though. cheri

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan
    Date: 1/31/2014 9:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, dear Cheryl:) Its very encouraging to hear from you.
  1. Date: 1/30/2014 4:16:00 PM
    Your poetry is always so great at setting a mood. Lust's virulent grip. Wow!!

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan
    Date: 1/31/2014 9:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Andrea:)
  1. Date: 1/30/2014 6:45:00 AM
    You describe the void of a missing lover so well here Bindu, you're up to your usual high standard good girl, xxx

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan
    Date: 1/31/2014 9:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Vie! I am glad you like the poem.
  1. Date: 1/29/2014 1:50:00 PM
    bindu, my dear.. hope to read ou soon.. missing you!.. huggs

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan
    Date: 1/31/2014 9:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Are you well now? Thank you for stopping by:) you take care and take it easy. hugs!
  1. Date: 1/29/2014 9:39:00 AM
    Wow,i dont get around much lately,,,,but this is sensational Bindu,, you are truly a wondrous poet....

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan
    Date: 1/31/2014 9:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Harry! How lovely to have you visit!
  1. Date: 1/27/2014 2:41:00 PM
    enticing the senses in an earthy way, dear bindu.. a languis yet terrific wrk so well done... huggs

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan
    Date: 1/29/2014 5:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, dear Nette! I've been away for so long, I mean to catch up here, looking forward to reading your latest work. hugs!
  1. Date: 1/27/2014 12:37:00 PM
    This made me smile. Your words flow so well. I'd like to add you to my favorite poets :)

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan
    Date: 1/29/2014 5:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    How lovely! thank you, Sam, I'm honoured:)
  1. Date: 1/26/2014 12:45:00 PM
    - Fantastic and skillfully written, dear Bindu !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan
    Date: 1/29/2014 5:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Anne Lise:) Been away for a while, I am looking forward to reading some your latest:)
  1. Date: 1/26/2014 12:34:00 PM
    Bindu excellent piece of work...David

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan
    Date: 1/29/2014 5:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, David!
  1. Date: 1/24/2014 9:35:00 AM
    WoW! Dramatic and powerful are the words and concept within this wonderful poem, Bindu.

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan
    Date: 1/29/2014 5:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Jerry! I am glad you liked this poem.
  1. Date: 1/24/2014 6:36:00 AM
    wonderfully mysterious, Bindu! "There was bliss that smiled for a fleeting lifetime" intense and perfect! love, love, love it! jimbo

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan
    Date: 1/29/2014 5:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Jimbo! its good to hear from you, howv you been?
  1. Date: 1/23/2014 7:52:00 PM
    DEEP!!! Great word usage in this one, Bindu! As always!

    Vijayan Avatar Bindu Vijayan
    Date: 1/23/2014 10:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Andrea! Its very encouraging to hear from you. hugs.
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