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With Final Burst

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With Final Burst

With final burst of golden rays
sun sets below the horizon
day fades away and here night stays

From south gentle warm breeze plays
luring beckoning the siren
with final burst of golden rays

Siren calls hearts are set ablaze
and rising up comes Poseidon
day fades away and here night  stays

Together they play in the bays
ride waves on the crest of Zion
with final burst of golden rays

There is no more time for delays
a merry nod to Orion 
day fades away and here night stays

As departing we go our ways
as daylight for us is poison
With final burst of golden rays
day fades away and night here stays

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  1. Date: 1/19/2014 3:20:00 PM
    I like this form, you have brought it to life. Well done Shadow.

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 1/19/2014 4:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ty Rick it is a lovely form Shadow x smile hug
  1. Date: 1/19/2014 11:33:00 AM
    Beautifully accomplished Shadow! It shines and you radiate! My best, chuck

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 1/19/2014 4:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    aw ty Chuck glad you enjoyed Shadow x smile hug
  1. Date: 1/18/2014 2:50:00 PM
    - A beautiful poem from your thoughts, Shadow. - As always enjoyable to read your poem! - Have a nice weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 1/19/2014 4:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ty Anne Lise hope yours was good Shadow x smile hug