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  1. Date: 1/18/2014 7:55:00 AM have made an inspiring poem out of love in nature!!!...i commend your good heart for creating such a great piece like this... kudos!!!!..i hope you have a peaceful and happy,AiyaH ;-))

  1. Date: 1/17/2014 9:34:00 PM
    What can Brown do for you? Nicely written and decently descriptive. Easily places any reader into a vivid vicarious experience. Just two corrections are needed, and are both in your 15th line: "excepted" should be presented as "accepted", and "powers" needs an apostrophe due to the presence of a possessive case.