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- Men - Cars - Women -

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- Men - Cars - Women -


  If you see
   a man opens
     the car door 
       for a woman ....
         He certainly has
           a brand new car ...
            or a very young
             and beautiful mistress
               His pride ...
                a conquest ... 
                  the gleaming varnish
                    reminds him of
                     sensual red woman lips
                      Excite shining
                       in his eyes - 
                        you will always
                          be his number two




13.01.2014
A-L Andresen :))

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  1. Date: 5/16/2014 4:34:00 PM
    so true , dear

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 5/17/2014 6:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for the nice visit, Farhana ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/2/2014 12:57:00 PM
    I renew my BMW every 3 years. If I were married , Would I renew my wife similarly? A very enjoyable read though.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 2/2/2014 2:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - I hope not :) - Thanks for the nice visit, Darren. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 2/1/2014 9:01:00 AM
    Anne Lise - How great those Ferrari's art! Absolutely enjoyable. Hit the spot. love, Kathy

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 2/1/2014 9:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Glad you liked my little smile :) - "- Men - Cars - Women -", Kathryn !!! Thanks for the nice visit. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/31/2014 10:07:00 PM
    Another very creative write that has me smiling, sadly I have an old car, but I can say I open the door for others, just seems the right thing to do!!!! :) And my car is so old, opening the door for someone is the highlight, all down hill from there!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 2/1/2014 6:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Glad you liked my little smile :) - "- Men - Cars - Women -", Arthur !!! Thanks for the nice visit. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/30/2014 4:11:00 PM
    Hello Anne Lise, good reading here I haven't had a red car...or for that matter a 'scarlet woman' for many old years.. L O L, however enjoyed the write, and thank you for the remarks on the Lina-Marie poem I did.. Joe.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 1/30/2014 6:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Glad you liked my little smile :) - "- Men - Cars - Women -", Joe !!! Thanks for the nice visit. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/29/2014 3:54:00 AM
    If only the woman could be as faithful as the car.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 1/29/2014 4:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - In true love they are :))) - Thanks for the nice visit, T.S. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/28/2014 12:24:00 AM
    OUCH, Anne-Lise!-LOL Believe it or not sweetie, "there are a few "Real Gentlemen" Antiques, still around from the good ole' days! smile Hahahahaha,,,Very Nice Work! xoxoxoxo Robert OBTW,,,nice form and construct of this piece.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 1/28/2014 2:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Yes, men are different ..... as it is with women...:)) - Glad you liked my little smile :) - "- Men - Cars - Women -", Robert !!! Thanks for the nice visit. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/23/2014 2:43:00 PM
    Too many people who are like this, the ego and the selfish nature of man is often his undoing, or hers in many cases these days. Great poem Anne.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 1/23/2014 2:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - So true, Tim... well said :)) - Glad you liked my little smile :) - "- Men - Cars - Women -" !!! Thanks for the nice visit. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/22/2014 3:23:00 AM
    ha, ha. yes, the male ego does take some casualties.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 1/22/2014 3:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Glad you liked my little smile :) - "- Men - Cars - Women -", Michael !!! Thanks for the nice visit. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/20/2014 9:20:00 AM
    Loved you poem... But for my Hubby it's a brand new computer and new hobby sites to go to... LOL

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 1/20/2014 2:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Glad you liked my little smile :) - "- Men - Cars - Women -", Carol !!! Thanks for the nice visit. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/19/2014 4:32:00 PM
    Ha ha enjoyed your poem. Should I stop opening doors for women? Warm thoughts, Ralph

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 1/19/2014 4:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for the nice visit and comment Ralph. - your words are encouraging and supportive :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/19/2014 3:31:00 PM
    Generally nothing beats a new car, but a woman will always give great competition!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 1/19/2014 3:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for the nice visit, Dominique. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/19/2014 1:47:00 PM
    Ha ha ha had me smiling with this poem. A man and his car is tough competition for a woman. Have a nice weekend. love phyl

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 1/19/2014 2:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Glad you liked my little smile :) - "- Men - Cars - Women -", Phyllis !!! Thanks for the nice visit. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/19/2014 11:52:00 AM
    Men and their toys!! lol

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 1/19/2014 12:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes .... toys :)) - Thanks for the nice visit, Kira. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/19/2014 11:23:00 AM
    This piece so rings true of many men. If they only knew that their toys will lose luster but the woman will continue to shine. Tim

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 1/19/2014 11:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - So true, Tim... well said :)) - Glad you liked my little smile :) - "- Men - Cars - Women -" !!! Thanks for the nice visit. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/17/2014 7:46:00 AM
    ohh, toys for the big boys--except women.. how's your day, anne?... huggs

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 1/17/2014 7:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thank you, Nette // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/16/2014 5:57:00 PM
    Anne-Lise I loved it but: You....sure ain't no number two! hugs, chuck

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 1/17/2014 2:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Glad you liked my little smile :) - "- Men - Cars - Women -", Chuck !!! Thanks for the nice visit. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/16/2014 4:12:00 PM
    lol,, witty write, my friend : )

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 1/17/2014 2:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Glad you liked my little smile :) - "- Men - Cars - Women -", Jack !!! Thanks for the nice visit. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/16/2014 2:11:00 PM
    I like the way it is written

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 1/17/2014 2:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for the nice visit, James. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/16/2014 12:54:00 PM
    There maybe a lot of truth in this unique write, But for me, It's the woman first. Although, we might have the car, but not always have the woman. I love the style and delivery. well done. best wishes. Pete.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 1/16/2014 1:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Glad you liked my little smile :) - "- Men - Cars - Women -", Peter !!! Thanks for the nice visit. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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