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There's a whisper deep within you

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There's a whisper deep within you

The whisper deep within you

There’s a whisper deep within you
Like a kind of shadowed feel
It’s always there, it is you!
It’s the, you, the one that’s ‘real’ 
It’s there each moment of the day
But few will notice this
Their mind talk pushes it away
So never they find bliss.

Just stop the mind a moment
Take a look at who ‘you’ be
You must dance within the music
Of the love, and mystery
That shines just like a diamond
In a mirror shiny bright
You must listen to your own self
If you want to see the light

No book can ever save you
No counselor, nor priest.
No guru, but the one within
Can ever tame the beast
But the song goes on forever
If you find that light in you
To look so deep within you
Is the only thing to do.

12 January 2014 @ 1333hrs
Peter Duggan, for Georgios contest
‘In the faraway’  spiritual.

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  1. Date: 1/28/2014 10:30:00 AM
    Ahh!! Great quality poetry!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 1/28/2014 7:20:00 AM
    Peter I loved this very fine piece of spiritual write. It's so true, 'a whisper deep within us'.. Congrats on your wonderful win in this contest!.. Have a nice day! gautami

  1. Date: 1/27/2014 8:49:00 PM
    this one is very special. A well deserved win!! Congratulations.

  1. Date: 1/27/2014 8:58:00 AM
    Enjoyed the poem for In the faraway contest and congrats on the win, Peter

  1. Date: 1/27/2014 7:49:00 AM
    I love it Peter, You always out do yourself. Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 1/27/2014 6:09:00 AM
    Peter: Congrats on your nicely crafted poem and great win! 7 G.

  1. Date: 1/15/2014 3:44:00 AM
    very inspirational peter love it Shadow x smile hug

  1. Date: 1/13/2014 6:20:00 PM
    Meaningful poem Peter. I thought the message was inspiring, it springs forth new inspirational thoughts upon the mind.

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 1/13/2014 8:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I am more than certain you have felt that Whisper, Mustapha. Your writing says it all. Thank you again for your kind comments....Peter
  1. Date: 1/13/2014 12:22:00 PM
    i understand what you are trying to say here always listen to that inner voice, the voice of right over wrong, the whisper of instinct within the soul. You've spoken very well with your words here. thanks my friend for listening. cheri

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 1/13/2014 3:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    And you have done very well with your comments lol. This whisper is what you are when you are just being. No thoughts, no emotions nothing but you just being, You have got the gist of it, Cherri. We all walk around minds chattering all day, but behind that chatter is you. Thanks for understanding...peter
  1. Date: 1/12/2014 5:11:00 PM
    Ever so inspiring Peter, just love your poetry...

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 1/12/2014 10:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Than you Harry so nice of you to comment.....Peter
  1. Date: 1/12/2014 4:37:00 PM
    a sure winner here, my friend - beautiful

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 1/12/2014 10:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much for your kind comments Jack....peter
  1. Date: 1/12/2014 3:24:00 PM
    gently woven with such glorious undertones, peter... poetic spirit rising through your heart's eyes.. incredibly done!.. huggs

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 1/12/2014 3:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Nette. this is the stuff I love to write, it comes from a special place in me,.I appreciate the kindness in your comments my friend.....Peter
  1. Date: 1/12/2014 10:51:00 AM
    You write with so much wisdom Peter, And you always have a good message in your poems. People with great knowledge means nothing, if you don't have the wisdom to use it correctly.

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 1/12/2014 3:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Roger you are too kind to me, those words come from a deep place and almost write themselves. It's what I love to write. I appreciate your comments my friend they are an inspiration to me.....Peter
  1. Date: 1/12/2014 2:44:00 AM
    a whisper seems shouting so loud in your poem ,Mr. Duggan!!!! ...very awesome write.. thank you for sharing us this winning piece :)) ..

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 1/12/2014 4:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you very much Aiyah for your very kind comments. that whisper is calling out loudly to every one, we just don't hear it....Peter
  1. Date: 1/12/2014 1:13:00 AM
    This is lovely cuz, soothing and calming feel to it, good luck in the contest with this xx

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 1/12/2014 3:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Cuz, that's the stuff that I love to write Suzi. It kind of writes me. There is something so spiritual in me {Spiritual, not religious) and it just kind of pushes those thing out. It's me these days, pure me. Thanks for your kind comments, my best cousin......Peterxxxx