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Blind

Fornicated bliss
Devoured, unearthed, blinded
Tomorrow lacks sight

© Drake J. Eszes

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  1. Date: 4/24/2014 7:25:00 AM
    So much expressed in just eight words.. Great poem :) Ana

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 4/24/2014 7:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes, that was the plan. :) Hi & thank you so much, Ana.
  1. Date: 3/29/2014 2:06:00 PM
    Dazzling senryu Worth reading more than once, twice.. Dutch greetings Elly

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 3/29/2014 2:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Very cool of you to say. Thank you so much, Elly!
  1. Date: 2/15/2014 4:37:00 PM
    A few words can say so much. Great work, thanks for sharing.... Lucilla

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 2/15/2014 7:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes, I couldn't agree more. :) Gracias, Lucilla!
  1. Date: 2/2/2014 11:28:00 PM
    Great job.. love this Senryu.... its beautiful !!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 2/3/2014 9:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Awesome. Thank you so much, Debbie! =)
  1. Date: 1/27/2014 5:13:00 AM
    glad I came by to read this one. along the lines of carpe diem, but with more...oomph?

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 1/27/2014 9:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Many thanks, Mike!
  1. Date: 1/23/2014 9:18:00 PM
    Great "soul" movement in this brief art! Wow! Carried away in just 3-lines! To mine faves! Jimbo

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 1/23/2014 9:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hell yeah!!! You rock so hard, Jimbo! Many, many thanks!!! =D
  1. Date: 1/20/2014 11:30:00 PM
    A long night of romance. nicely done

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 1/20/2014 11:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Essentially, yes. :) Many thanks, JT.
  1. Date: 1/19/2014 11:10:00 AM
    Californication comes into my mind. And I didn't like what that was all about but somehow I do not think you were using the word in that context! I think this is a cool message, to be blinded by bliss in the moment. Not caring about tomorrow. Hope I got that right!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 1/19/2014 12:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yeah, nor did I. But, you're quite right about where I WAS going with this. :) Thank you so much, Andrea!
  1. Date: 1/19/2014 10:30:00 AM
    I figured out how to fix the soup mail problem now I think you can soup me x

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 1/19/2014 12:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ok! =D
  1. Date: 1/19/2014 9:40:00 AM
    Great Haiku Drake. So much meaning. Take care.

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 1/19/2014 9:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi & thank you, Vincent. That's greatly appreciated.
  1. Date: 1/15/2014 5:24:00 PM
    Interesting one, open for multiple interpretations. Bliss can be blinding, making the future murky but the present enriching. Thanks for the comment on my latest poem. I appreciate your uplifting words more than I can express. (: Always, Laura

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 1/15/2014 5:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I'd have no problem with you trying to express it. True story. =) Thank you very much, Laura! It's nice to see you around here again.
  1. Date: 1/15/2014 1:33:00 PM
    soup mail

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 1/15/2014 4:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Tried to respond, but said "restricted access". So, I do hope & wish the best to you & the family! *Huge hug*
  1. Date: 1/15/2014 1:32:00 PM
    Plant a flower look away, oh what a miss Stop awhile and give the flower no diss, In dew time she''ll bloom a fruitful kiss Appreciation of the moment, The beauty in an undiluted form, Well now, we can take it nice and slow Blinded by a beautiful sigh?t, Go ahead blind me again, sweetheart, my rose colored shades can take it, big hugs, "Just A Flower" thanking you for stopping by, Always, Smiles, and Never sorrow to give or borrow xxx

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 1/15/2014 4:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Damn!!! Just....DAMN, Vie! =D Color me floored. I've responded to your Soupmail too. Many, many thanks!
  1. Date: 1/14/2014 6:28:00 PM
    Truth in seventeen syllables... Very nice work... Jack

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 1/14/2014 6:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    That's how I roll, sir. Many thanks, Jack. You're awesome. =)
  1. Date: 1/13/2014 9:27:00 AM
    Good morning Drake.

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 1/14/2014 5:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Buenos dias, Richard!! =D
  1. Date: 1/12/2014 8:46:00 AM
    Enjoy such blissful moments..I guess not kmowing what tomorrow brings makes life more interesting and exciting..unless one is searching for security and a plan.Thought provoking senryu..Drake!!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 1/14/2014 5:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yup, precisely. Many, many thanks, Charmaine! =D
  1. Date: 1/11/2014 9:59:00 AM
    yep! Definitely caught up in the moment! very nice, drake. hugs, catie :)

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 1/11/2014 10:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    It's a beautiful thing. =) Hi & thank you, Catie!!!!!
  1. Date: 1/11/2014 12:13:00 AM
    -insert myriad of curse words here- Bro, this is pretty brilliant. I really dig it.

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 1/11/2014 9:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    HAHAH! Amen! Thanks, James!
  1. Date: 1/10/2014 11:02:00 PM
    I have so much on my mind today that it's hard to think about tomorrow sometimes. I don't know if that's a curse or a blessing, so for me it's true---tomorrow does lack sight. Great work. Fornicated bliss--- like the sound of it. Bev

    Crespo Avatar Beverly Crespo
    Date: 1/15/2014 4:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi! will talk later tonight! Bev
    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 1/11/2014 9:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I like the sound of that too. It's a curse or blessing depending on how full or empty your glass is. Great to see you around, Bev. I hope you had a great New Year! =)
  1. Date: 1/10/2014 9:18:00 PM
    I like to live in today, as I am forced to live in it at that moment, but tomorrow I can not see! Your poem explains this very well my friend! What a grandiose piece, Great Work!!

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 1/11/2014 9:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes, absolutely. You can only hope, but not really see. Thanks so much, Russell! =D
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