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Sun Dancing

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Sun Dancing

dancing across sky
stepping between passing clouds
not skipping a beat
the moon longs for attention
in the end sun is eclipsed


Andrea's "One in Five for Beauty Strive Contest"

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  1. Date: 2/11/2014 7:36:00 PM
    Thank you for the epic dancing imagery... ~ Love ~ SKAT

  1. Date: 1/19/2014 3:11:00 PM
    This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 1/19/2014 3:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Sara, if you have a chance check out my latest poem "Thought Police" I think you would appreciate it.
  1. Date: 1/13/2014 8:20:00 AM
    A sweet and lilting piece. Congrats. BG

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 1/13/2014 9:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Barbara
  1. Date: 1/12/2014 5:07:00 PM
    Congrats on a fine win Richard

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 1/12/2014 5:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Joseph.
  1. Date: 1/12/2014 4:46:00 PM
    Love the moon winning..eclipsing the sun! Wonderful win Richard....congratulations.. :-)

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 1/12/2014 5:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Donna, this was a fun one to write.
  1. Date: 1/12/2014 11:43:00 AM
    what a delightful dance. Dutch Greetings Elly

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 1/12/2014 11:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Elly
  1. Date: 1/12/2014 11:37:00 AM
    Congrats Richard, I got to read this wonderful poem again.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 1/12/2014 11:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Roger.
  1. Date: 1/12/2014 12:59:00 AM
    Beautiful write on the theme and congrats on the win, Richard

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 1/12/2014 11:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Dr. Ram.
  1. Date: 1/11/2014 9:36:00 PM
    Very well done, Richard! a Clever one. Congrats for your win.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 1/12/2014 12:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Andrea, I made a change to third line.
  1. Date: 1/10/2014 9:27:00 AM
    Love the image here of the moon as a young girl dancing along trying to get sun boy's attention. Another amazing poem from you my friend

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 1/10/2014 9:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I had fun writing this one. I'm glad you like it.
  1. Date: 1/9/2014 7:42:00 AM
    I love it! Especially your ending line; beautiful Richard ;)

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 1/10/2014 9:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks!
  1. Date: 1/8/2014 9:38:00 PM
    Sun Dancing was line dancing it's way across the poetic sky, thanks to Richard! Loved it! chuck

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 1/9/2014 8:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Chuck
  1. Date: 1/8/2014 2:26:00 PM
    I can see that you were blessed by God Himself to be able to write so well. Another very well written poem Richard.....Roger

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 1/8/2014 2:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    What a nice thing to say Roger, I believe myself that God has been very kind to bestow me with this gift.
  1. Date: 1/8/2014 1:19:00 PM
    the wealth and depth in this write Rick are vast and wonderful Shadow x smile hug

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 1/8/2014 1:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hugs back to you Shadow.
  1. Date: 1/8/2014 8:15:00 AM
    A perfect Tanka Richard, happy and well written. Anne

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 1/8/2014 8:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Anne
  1. Date: 1/7/2014 11:51:00 PM
    What a lovely, happy dance of a poem, with a perfect title to match!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 1/8/2014 8:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I haven't done many of these but I enjoyed this one.
  1. Date: 1/7/2014 7:18:00 PM
    Nice write Richard, enjoyed this one....Peter

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 1/8/2014 8:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Peter,I hope all is well in your world.
  1. Date: 1/7/2014 5:55:00 PM
    I love your creative mind Richard.Is mama still writing?

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 1/8/2014 8:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Charmaine, yes mom now has a second poem posted.
  1. Date: 1/7/2014 11:19:00 AM
    - Dance with the sun !!! - Good luck in the contest, Richard. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 1/8/2014 8:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, a little luck couldn't hurt.
  1. Date: 1/7/2014 9:29:00 AM
    feeel-good melody; i bounce with your sun dance, rich... rated greeat!.. huggs

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 1/8/2014 8:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Huggs back and thanks Nette.
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