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DIFFERENT MOLD, THIS TIME

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DIFFERENT MOLD, THIS TIME



Fragile plate of twilight bursts on my feet; roads empty, save for a shadow like me limping from clay of brittle tears... alone within cleavage of moon’s torn inlay looking for souls who are not there ... and to wail for dreams upon a mute star, the last begging of fate’s new postscript with nothing but a racing heart to twirl the way, a different mold, this time-- as husk peels marrow of cheek’s bones. A lamppost mirrors my glossed frame rising while I close my eyes, awaiting morn to flicker on spoiled gown: whispers begin a chain-link of notes down the night; the fire from the navel breathes again like an orange wave...drawing me close to clustered jewels of the world.
Kintsukuroi Contest of Roy Jerden by nette onclaud

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  1. Date: 1/17/2014 8:29:00 PM

    Beautiful words Nette. I would need to have the poem deconstructed to be able to relate it to the Kintsukuroi contest, as it is beyond my poor powers of comprehension. Thanks for participating.

  1. Date: 1/8/2014 4:13:00 PM

    nette can you fix your contest directions so I can read the whole thing? pretty please? L & L

  1. Date: 1/8/2014 10:35:00 AM

    They are there, manipulating time to collide with fate's benevolence. Deep! ... I hafta come home, Nette, my love is here. Thanks for visiting and leaving a warm embrace, behind! Muahhh on the forehead or where you choose.. Ha ha ha

  1. Date: 1/8/2014 8:38:00 AM

    The intricate bodily reactions - typical nette. You are quite demanding of your reader, but if the reader takes the time it is well worth it. Just a damn minute! I gotta read this again. Love, daver

  1. Date: 1/8/2014 8:07:00 AM

    Nette, nobody does it quite like you. You write the kind of poems that people will look back on years later and say...she was truly great.

  1. Date: 1/8/2014 2:05:00 AM

    Beautiful.. your world is sure full of magic, Nette:) hugs.

  1. Date: 1/8/2014 1:50:00 AM

    I'm rejoicing... and I'm consumed in the golden beauty of these lines. Just want to go on reading again, this is from your heart straight to mine, dear nette.... Wish it was for a contest of mine! Love you xoxo..

  1. Date: 1/7/2014 8:04:00 PM

    With every end the possibility of a new beginning. A great depiction of a searching soul that hasn't lost all hope yet even in the face of adversity. Great work.

  1. Date: 1/7/2014 5:23:00 PM

    A wonderful poem you have penned here Nette. so nice to read....peter

  1. Date: 1/7/2014 5:03:00 PM

    An excellent post seeet Nettie..Wonderful!Hope you are doing fine dear.

  1. Date: 1/7/2014 1:37:00 PM

    My dear Nette, only you would have the know how, to breath fire from the Navel, I pray no sought jewel escapes you, love, hugs, peace xxx

  1. Date: 1/7/2014 11:49:00 AM

    WONDDERFUL WRITE WITH A LOT DEEP MEED THIS WRITE AND MEANING HERE AND IT HAS ALOT OF LAYERS TEXTURES TO IT, SORRY MY CAP-LOCKS ARE STICKING LOL BUT I ENJOY YOPOES THANKS FOR THE CONGRADS ON MY WORK. CHERI

  1. Date: 1/7/2014 11:48:00 AM

    WONDDERFUL WRITE WITH A LOT DEEP MEED THIS WRITE AND MEANING HERE AND IT HAS ALOT OF LAYERS TEXTURES TO IT, SORRY MY CAP-LOCKS ARE STICKING LOL BUT I ENJOY YOPOES THANKS FOR THE CONGRADS ON MY WORK. CHERI

  1. Date: 1/7/2014 11:15:00 AM

    This is amazing, Nette, as only you can create in your special way. I enjoyed reading this. Love the bold, which give power to the statements. Hugs xox

  1. Date: 1/7/2014 8:14:00 AM

    Hi Nette, An awesome as well as enchanting write.. Ken

  1. Date: 1/7/2014 7:52:00 AM

    - A deep ... touching, but beautiful poem Nette :) - The day is rainy and gray .... but it's a whole new day, enjoy it :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 1/7/2014 7:38:00 AM

    There you go morphing into the firefly of one winged night. Words strewn like cracks only to be knit together in a fine tapestry. Seventh wonder of the world; that's you!

  1. Date: 1/7/2014 7:32:00 AM

    I find this soaring like a phoenix amid the dark of a sullen atmosphere. You write so efffortlessly, Nette, a young dame of imagistic poetry. Unique!

  1. Date: 1/7/2014 7:08:00 AM

    Wow! This is an amazing and energetic write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this marvelous and remarkable poem this morning! My favorite lines have to be, "A lamppost mirrors my glossed frame rising/ while I close my eyes, awaiting morn" now those are incredible lines there Nette! What a lovely piece, Great Work!!