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  1. Date: 2/12/2014 3:54:00 PM
    Brilliant poem, well written, love it. Best wishes, Linda

  1. Date: 1/21/2014 7:42:00 AM
    Ha...yes it does. I like this.

  1. Date: 1/6/2014 5:38:00 PM
    Very skillful and subtle, definite focus..'leads to strong overall impact, ( I do hope to see more ) David, I had noticed you were not around as much; thanks for your comments over my time here, Joe..'

  1. Date: 1/6/2014 5:13:00 PM
    Great excitement and intensity in this one..I enjoyed reading it this eve..Thanks for the uplifting visit to my page..Sara

  1. Date: 1/6/2014 4:02:00 PM
    hi David interesting pen I enjoyed it Shadow x smile hug

  1. Date: 1/5/2014 9:31:00 PM
    I promise not to try and get the last word ok but i enjoyed this write lol it has a bite two it. cheri

  1. Date: 1/5/2014 7:24:00 PM
    david, I am trying to play catch up right now and I have probably seen all your poems to date. But seeing this again, I want to fave it. It's simply fantastic.

  1. Date: 1/5/2014 1:13:00 PM
    Hi David a new year but still the same great penmanship, very clever and no buts about, all the best Poetowen

  1. Date: 1/5/2014 1:05:00 PM
    Hi David, Nice slice of life write..Thanks for your visit.. Ken

  1. Date: 1/5/2014 9:09:00 AM
    love the pause so metaphorically done, david... you nailed this once; i, i stammer with jaw dropped!..beautiful in capital letters!.. huggs

  1. Date: 1/5/2014 6:07:00 AM
    Clever and wise indeed my friend:-) Makes it brilliant also cos so many of us can relate to it! Have a peaceful and nice Sunday,David.Take Care,Arild

  1. Date: 1/4/2014 10:35:00 PM
    Wow..impressive....really great David....not pushing that last button is tough sometimes..but wise!

  1. Date: 1/4/2014 10:08:00 PM
    You crafted this piece masterfully David ...great wishes for the New Year

  1. Date: 1/4/2014 9:05:00 PM
    Clever and Wise message David!!!

  1. Date: 1/4/2014 7:53:00 PM
    Boy that having the last word thing is very HARD not to do [at least for me, shutting up is VERY hard] You on the other hand have way more tact! [I had to go back & re research R. B. did you know his family called him Robin? I didn't ;) what a kind comment you let if you see any dialect corrections please DO let me know.] Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/4/2014 6:07:00 PM
    Interesting write. I like and it reminded me of- Pro 17:1 Better is a dry morsel, and quietness therewith, than an house full of sacrifices with strife.- And the funny thing is when my wife and had I argument. There was a open pack of crackers and she spoke something and I stuffed handful in my mouth ending that debate. Thanks for sharing

  1. Date: 1/4/2014 2:38:00 PM
    But what David? There are so many buts here, is it reader discerns ? Love the idea of waiting to strike , yes good one xx

  1. Date: 1/4/2014 1:43:00 PM
    Good day David, just dropping in to say hello, I've enjoyed you're poem on the last word, I say, if you're going to say the last word, then make it a good one, love & hugs xxx

  1. Date: 1/3/2014 4:07:00 PM
    amazingly good work, David. Clever as can be in its symbolism. You rock!

  1. Date: 1/3/2014 4:03:00 PM
    Hi David,,this is clever poetry,and such truth,,although i admit to being guilty sometimes,,,