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Below is the poem entitled I will be yours which was written by poet Mohammad Abedin. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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I will be yours


One day you wrote your name on a paper
unfortunately this paper was torn
Another day you wrote your name on the sands
a tide came and washed it away...

When you wrote your name on a stone
that stone was broken
Finally you wrote your name on my mind
that name was ever-persistent...

This universe will be perished one day
but love will persist for ever
Even if there is a life after the death
I will be yours....

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  1. Date: 3/6/2014 12:32:00 AM
    Lovely poem...Seren Soupmail!!!

  1. Date: 2/11/2014 8:37:00 PM
    Mohammad, love the win... . Hugs* SKAT

  1. Date: 1/30/2014 12:03:00 AM
    Nice presetationn

  1. Date: 1/29/2014 9:42:00 AM
    I enjoyed reading this one again. Congratulations.

    Abedin Avatar Mohammad Abedin
    Date: 1/29/2014 12:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks
  1. Date: 1/29/2014 6:49:00 AM
    Wonderful poem and congrats on the fine win, Mohammad

    Abedin Avatar Mohammad Abedin
    Date: 1/29/2014 12:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Many thanks
  1. Date: 1/29/2014 12:03:00 AM
    Beautifully written Abedin! I like how your poem alludes to the temporary nature of words written on tangible surfaces and the permanence brought by connecting with someone. Very well written!

    Abedin Avatar Mohammad Abedin
    Date: 1/29/2014 12:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks
  1. Date: 1/17/2014 8:01:00 PM
    Thanks for participating in the Kintsukuroi contest!

    Abedin Avatar Mohammad Abedin
    Date: 1/29/2014 12:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Many thanks
  1. Date: 1/16/2014 6:14:00 PM
    Ther is life after death so your love is eternal.

  1. Date: 1/15/2014 6:52:00 AM
    Inspiring thoughts to give up something to relive and congrats on the fine win, Mohammad