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hauki x 3

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hauki x 3

lonely cloud wanders
over the expanse of sky
seeking for others

red stag on hilltop
silhouetted in sun light
roaring out his claim

black clouds whipping in
blustery winds stir the sea
towering waves crash down

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  1. Date: 12/26/2013 12:06:00 PM
    What a beautiful write. So visual and well written. I saw a stag on my way to Nottingham a few months ago. I was so happy as a child again. very well done, best wishes. Pete.

    Dome Avatar Peter Dome
    Date: 12/27/2013 8:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Wow, that must have been magical, something you wouldn't forget. thank you for sharing. take good care. best wishes. Pete.
    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 12/27/2013 5:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Peter I can remember finding a small fawn in Windsor great park as a child we did not touch it although we could have it was a magical moment ty very much Shadow x smile hug
  1. Date: 12/23/2013 7:25:00 AM
    I enjoyed the great imagery of this haiku Shadow...Merry Christmas

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 12/23/2013 7:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ty Joseph have a good week end Shadow x smile hug
  1. Date: 12/22/2013 1:17:00 PM
    Very descriptive work..I could almost see the scene..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 12/23/2013 6:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Sara my brave friend ty so much "season's greetings, peace and health" Shadow x smile hug
  1. Date: 12/22/2013 1:24:00 AM
    Beautiful imagery Shadow, very nice...peter

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 12/23/2013 6:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ty Peter "season's greetings to you and Vera" Shadow x smile hug
  1. Date: 12/22/2013 12:45:00 AM
    Good reading here Shadow, love your imagery and spirit in words used..'

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 12/23/2013 6:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Joe and ty dear "season's greetings" Shadow x smile hug
  1. Date: 12/21/2013 7:57:00 PM
    Beautiful images created , Shadow

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 12/23/2013 6:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi and ty Ram "season's greetings" Shadow x smile hug
  1. Date: 12/21/2013 3:36:00 PM
    Cheers x 3 for your lovely haiku's, Shadow. Have a good festive season ahead of you, my friend. Licia :-)

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 12/21/2013 4:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Licia ty for reading and enjoying season's greetings Shadow x smile hug
  1. Date: 12/21/2013 3:22:00 PM
    All three have their own unique power.

  1. Date: 12/21/2013 3:02:00 PM
    - 3 beautiful pearls on a string, Shadow !!! - - HAPPY CHRISTMAS !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 12/21/2013 4:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Anne Lise soon a new year with all its spills and thrills ty for your continued support season's greetings Shadow x smile hug