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  1. Date: 12/20/2013 12:54:00 PM
    thankyou for coments on mine love your writes this one very enchanting love the pattern xxx davidscott

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 12/20/2013 5:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi David. Thanks for letting me know you like it :)
  1. Date: 12/17/2013 7:07:00 PM
    AWESOME....:-) :-) :-) :-)

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 12/17/2013 7:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ;) thanks Donna
  1. Date: 12/17/2013 10:12:00 AM
    " what is essential is invisible to the eye.." you light this page with glitters of mysticism coloring the world through your imagination... refreshing, FJ.. huggs

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 12/17/2013 4:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks so much Nette. What a beautiful comment :)
  1. Date: 12/16/2013 3:00:00 PM
    Hi F.J., Enlightening write rich with imagery! Ken

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 12/16/2013 3:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey there Ken! thank you.
  1. Date: 12/16/2013 2:23:00 PM
    I love this beauty..Especially lines 5 & 6..and the ending gives an outstanding message.Bravo sweet friend-hugs Charma

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 12/16/2013 2:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You have just the imagination to see exactly what I'm saying Charma lol. I'm glad you like it.
  1. Date: 12/16/2013 1:40:00 PM
    Just amazing!Love this very much!

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 12/16/2013 2:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Kash :) I'm happy you liked it!
  1. Date: 12/16/2013 12:28:00 PM
    a colouring from the soul beautifully penned piece

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 12/16/2013 1:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Liam :)
  1. Date: 12/16/2013 12:08:00 PM
    Excellent in it's ability to produce the vibrancy of a soothing color filled day, I got lost in your colors both rich and bright, and I love the idea of a lavender tree, may I come along for the ride, I'll have the crimson stallion if you please, and thank you for edifying my day, hugs xxx

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 12/16/2013 12:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    LOL he's all yours! I have several other colors to choose from! Thanks Rose :)
  1. Date: 12/16/2013 10:11:00 AM
    Beautiful.....breathtaking.....What a beautiful world of colors......simply awesome....

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 12/16/2013 10:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Your Majesty! I'm honored! ;) thank you Eileen; keep your head up Lady.
  1. Date: 12/16/2013 7:34:00 AM
    The power & clarity on a fresh pair of eyes when they see through life's surfaces. Stunning.

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 12/16/2013 8:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    My bad. I was road tripping this weekend. ;-) I'm here now! =D
    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 12/16/2013 8:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I was starting to worry about you; you've been MIA longer than I am accustomed to ;) Thanks Drake
  1. Date: 12/15/2013 9:21:00 PM
    Beautiful, beautiful... with your signature power in that line - in the absence of light... Great work, lady!

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 12/16/2013 8:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Morning Bindu; it's always a pleasure to have a visit from you. Thank you Lady :)
  1. Date: 12/15/2013 8:39:00 PM
    What a thoughtful poem especially since your last thought is so abstract in that one would say that more light reveals more differences that create more subjectivity, but when light fades into black and white shades and then to total darkness it depends more on our imagination and then finally dreams to envision. I once wrote that "You cannot kiss the color that light has born but only visit the dampened glory that was there before your bleakness came to bind the night" I like your approach!

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 12/16/2013 8:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    They do Craig :) You are right on point. Thank you, I'm glad you liked it.
    cornish Avatar craig cornish
    Date: 12/15/2013 8:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I like your thoughts because I think they must talk of dreams and imagination and they do truly create worlds of our own.
  1. Date: 12/15/2013 8:15:00 PM
    I'll resist a comment on one of these comments, because I don't want to further coerce anyone else. I guess all the vivid imagery led me to the last line, and what a natural conclusion, but that's the power in it. Complex imagery yet you wind up right where you're supposed, minus some silly philosophical questions. Now I revisit the comment, I was avoiding, to say in the absence of light, there is imagination, maybe a dream state, meditation, just getting away from it all. Great Work

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 12/16/2013 8:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    LOL don't worry Wayland...we both know Jack doesn't actually need any coercing! Thank you very much.
  1. Date: 12/15/2013 7:14:00 PM
    I want to wrap these words around me and dream, this is stellar. Thank you.

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 12/15/2013 7:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Then I wish you all the vivid colors in the world! :) Thanks so much James.
  1. Date: 12/15/2013 6:27:00 PM
    Lovely write my heart was overwhelmed with all those colors. Enjoyed the read. No two people see life the same...peter

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 12/15/2013 6:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I'm glad your heart heard Peter; thank you so much.
  1. Date: 12/15/2013 4:42:00 PM
    Great work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 12/15/2013 5:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Sara :)
  1. Date: 12/15/2013 12:54:00 AM
    Our soul has a way of adding just the right amount of color to suit the mood. A lovely piece.

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 12/15/2013 5:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I think my soul's a bit over stimulated sometimes Richard! Lol. Thanks for stopping in ;)
  1. Date: 12/14/2013 11:47:00 PM
    The perfect 1, 2 punch. I was lost in a paradise unparalleled, then, the knockout finale stanza, hit hard!!! Gotta fave dis 1

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 12/15/2013 5:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    That thrills me to hear. Thank you Scribe. I'm glad it spoke to you.
  1. Date: 12/14/2013 10:09:00 PM
    In the absence of light we dream, traveling in colored landscapes, it is there we find a world within a world, sacred to the eyes of our spirit, setting it free to create

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 12/14/2013 10:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    And create we do ;) Thank you Frederic.
  1. Date: 12/14/2013 9:37:00 PM
    this is a gorgeous poem. Hubbie just called me to get off here and I'm glad I saw this one on my way off!!

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 12/14/2013 10:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Aww Andrea thank you so much! I'm glad you like it :)