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  1. Date: 12/20/2013 12:54:00 PM
    thankyou for coments on mine love your writes this one very enchanting love the pattern xxx davidscott

    Thomas Avatar FJ Thomas
    Date: 12/20/2013 5:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi David. Thanks for letting me know you like it :)
  1. Date: 12/17/2013 7:07:00 PM
    AWESOME....:-) :-) :-) :-)

    Thomas Avatar FJ Thomas
    Date: 12/17/2013 7:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ;) thanks Donna
  1. Date: 12/17/2013 10:12:00 AM
    " what is essential is invisible to the eye.." you light this page with glitters of mysticism coloring the world through your imagination... refreshing, FJ.. huggs

    Thomas Avatar FJ Thomas
    Date: 12/17/2013 4:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks so much Nette. What a beautiful comment :)
  1. Date: 12/16/2013 3:00:00 PM
    Hi F.J., Enlightening write rich with imagery! Ken

    Thomas Avatar FJ Thomas
    Date: 12/16/2013 3:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey there Ken! thank you.
  1. Date: 12/16/2013 2:23:00 PM
    I love this beauty..Especially lines 5 & 6..and the ending gives an outstanding message.Bravo sweet friend-hugs Charma

    Thomas Avatar FJ Thomas
    Date: 12/16/2013 2:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You have just the imagination to see exactly what I'm saying Charma lol. I'm glad you like it.
  1. Date: 12/16/2013 1:40:00 PM
    Just amazing!Love this very much!

    Thomas Avatar FJ Thomas
    Date: 12/16/2013 2:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Kash :) I'm happy you liked it!
  1. Date: 12/16/2013 12:28:00 PM
    a colouring from the soul beautifully penned piece

    Thomas Avatar FJ Thomas
    Date: 12/16/2013 1:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Liam :)
  1. Date: 12/16/2013 12:08:00 PM
    Excellent in it's ability to produce the vibrancy of a soothing color filled day, I got lost in your colors both rich and bright, and I love the idea of a lavender tree, may I come along for the ride, I'll have the crimson stallion if you please, and thank you for edifying my day, hugs xxx

    Thomas Avatar FJ Thomas
    Date: 12/16/2013 12:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    LOL he's all yours! I have several other colors to choose from! Thanks Rose :)
  1. Date: 12/16/2013 10:11:00 AM
    Beautiful.....breathtaking.....What a beautiful world of colors......simply awesome....

    Thomas Avatar FJ Thomas
    Date: 12/16/2013 10:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Your Majesty! I'm honored! ;) thank you Eileen; keep your head up Lady.
  1. Date: 12/16/2013 7:34:00 AM
    The power & clarity on a fresh pair of eyes when they see through life's surfaces. Stunning.

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 12/16/2013 8:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    My bad. I was road tripping this weekend. ;-) I'm here now! =D
    Thomas Avatar FJ Thomas
    Date: 12/16/2013 8:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I was starting to worry about you; you've been MIA longer than I am accustomed to ;) Thanks Drake
  1. Date: 12/15/2013 8:15:00 PM
    I'll resist a comment on one of these comments, because I don't want to further coerce anyone else. I guess all the vivid imagery led me to the last line, and what a natural conclusion, but that's the power in it. Complex imagery yet you wind up right where you're supposed, minus some silly philosophical questions. Now I revisit the comment, I was avoiding, to say in the absence of light, there is imagination, maybe a dream state, meditation, just getting away from it all. Great Work

    Thomas Avatar FJ Thomas
    Date: 12/16/2013 8:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    LOL don't worry Wayland...we both know Jack doesn't actually need any coercing! Thank you very much.
  1. Date: 12/15/2013 7:14:00 PM
    I want to wrap these words around me and dream, this is stellar. Thank you.

    Thomas Avatar FJ Thomas
    Date: 12/15/2013 7:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Then I wish you all the vivid colors in the world! :) Thanks so much James.
  1. Date: 12/15/2013 6:27:00 PM
    Lovely write my heart was overwhelmed with all those colors. Enjoyed the read. No two people see life the same...peter

    Thomas Avatar FJ Thomas
    Date: 12/15/2013 6:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I'm glad your heart heard Peter; thank you so much.
  1. Date: 12/15/2013 4:42:00 PM
    Great work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

    Thomas Avatar FJ Thomas
    Date: 12/15/2013 5:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Sara :)
  1. Date: 12/15/2013 12:54:00 AM
    Our soul has a way of adding just the right amount of color to suit the mood. A lovely piece.

    Thomas Avatar FJ Thomas
    Date: 12/15/2013 5:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I think my soul's a bit over stimulated sometimes Richard! Lol. Thanks for stopping in ;)
  1. Date: 12/14/2013 10:09:00 PM
    In the absence of light we dream, traveling in colored landscapes, it is there we find a world within a world, sacred to the eyes of our spirit, setting it free to create

    Thomas Avatar FJ Thomas
    Date: 12/14/2013 10:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    And create we do ;) Thank you Frederic.
  1. Date: 12/14/2013 9:37:00 PM
    this is a gorgeous poem. Hubbie just called me to get off here and I'm glad I saw this one on my way off!!

    Thomas Avatar FJ Thomas
    Date: 12/14/2013 10:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Aww Andrea thank you so much! I'm glad you like it :)