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  1. Date: 12/18/2013 2:55:00 AM
    Laura as always a stunning write, it holds the reader from start to end, thrilling, erotic and sensual, very well done, have a peaceful holiday….David

  1. Date: 12/17/2013 10:54:00 AM
    A play on emotion. The detail used in describing every aspect of this encounter, is brilliant. A fear and pleasure cocktail, without a moment of boredom. In love with a monster! You are a hell of a writer, one of my favorites on this site and the books I've read!!! Seriously

    Breidenthal Avatar Laura Breidenthal
    Date: 12/17/2013 11:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks so much Scribe! That means the world to me! I was afraid it would just be too long and strenuous. Thanks for giving it a chance. (:
  1. Date: 12/17/2013 8:54:00 AM
    An exceptional write with erotic and horrific duality. You had me from beginning to end and I was helpless but to follow from start to finish. Outstanding writing!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 12/19/2013 8:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    It was well worth the time. I also would like to wish your merry Christmas.
    Breidenthal Avatar Laura Breidenthal
    Date: 12/17/2013 10:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks so much for enduring through it. I know it is ridiculously long and I really appreciate your time. : ) ~Laura
  1. Date: 12/14/2013 1:50:00 PM
    Well I guess my question is fact or fiction, history or mystery? The only comment I can make before knowing that is that, sometimes there's even a duality in events so terrible. Those events can cause feeling where there was none, give reason to madness. Very vivid imagery throughout and a powerful story either way.

    Breidenthal Avatar Laura Breidenthal
    Date: 12/14/2013 9:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Unfortunately Wayland, it is not done! O_O Poetrysoup made me stop posting for a while. XD Haha. Glad you... um read it. I was wavering whether to post it. ~Laura
  1. Date: 12/14/2013 10:46:00 AM
    A good one makes one feel everybit of it and well penned. Kudos to u. Love alwaz, Based on Belief

    Breidenthal Avatar Laura Breidenthal
    Date: 12/14/2013 9:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    More comin' ;) ~Laura