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  1. Date: 12/18/2013 12:17:00 PM
    i started....

    Breidenthal Avatar Laura Breidenthal
    Date: 12/19/2013 2:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    And thank you John for giving it a chance! It isn't an easy poem to read, I don't think. Not for myself anyway. Though as I wrote it, it flowed like a agitated river. I hope you are doing well. ~Laura
  1. Date: 12/17/2013 10:01:00 AM
    I shall proceed... You have my attention, Laura!

  1. Date: 12/17/2013 8:09:00 AM
    On to part two.

  1. Date: 12/14/2013 1:21:00 PM
    Ok I'm drawn to read the next one, why did I stop writing in a notebook. I lose so many lines and thoughts. Intriguing work so far.

    Breidenthal Avatar Laura Breidenthal
    Date: 12/19/2013 2:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for giving my poem a chance! ~Laura