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The Swarm

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The Swarm

The fresh air sang after the storm
all was washed clean by the rain
the insects all started to swarm

Made people duck as they reform
they had made a very long train
the fresh air sang after the storm

They were buzzing as they reformed
the new hive now them would sustain
the insects all started to swarm

All snug now their honey would form
this hive would be their new domain
the fresh air sang after the storm

The combs of honey multiform
the happy humming quite insane
the insects all started to swarm

they are so happy to be warm
yet so many were lost or slain
the fresh air sang after the storm
the insects all started to swarm

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  1. Date: 12/16/2013 4:58:00 AM
    I find this piece very interesting. Well done Shadow.

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 12/16/2013 7:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Rick interesting is good lol ty dear Shadow x smile hug
  1. Date: 12/14/2013 6:23:00 PM
    Cleverly done Shadow....loved it....PS.we have a honey bee colony ordered ..we pick it up in the spring...I can't wait!!!!

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 12/16/2013 7:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Donna that is wonderful you will love them. ty for reading and enjoying it Shadow x smile hug
  1. Date: 12/14/2013 4:12:00 AM
    Very Nice poem Shadow, I love bees, and I loved your poem...Peter

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 12/14/2013 2:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ty Peter much appreciated Shadow x smile hug
  1. Date: 12/13/2013 7:29:00 PM
    Great write. love Bees. if only people worked together, like bees or ants, we'd have a better world. Best wishes. Pete.

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 12/14/2013 2:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    very true Peter ty for kind comments Shadow x smile hug
  1. Date: 12/13/2013 12:45:00 PM
    - A nice poem and messages, Shadow ! - I wish you a great weekend .... It's almost Christmas :))) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 12/14/2013 2:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Anne Lise ty dear hoping you have a great weekend too Shadow x smile hug