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- Dancing On The Moon -

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- Dancing On The Moon -



              Fairy dance on the night moon
              The moon is half a shiny bow
              Resting on a dark blue velvet carpet
              Lingering in the shadows of passion
              I want to dance with the fairies in the night
              Sitting on top of the moon's arc

              Feeling the wind blow in my hair
              Looking down on everything that is at all worth seeing
              It is joy and delight in my eyes
              I hear the beautiful song ... it is the nightingale melody
              This is the place where I bring ... imagination wings
              A world there is room for everybody to live
              A world where no one needs to strive
              Then the tide can just come




12.12.2013
A-L  Andresen :)

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  1. Date: 4/6/2014 8:16:00 AM
    Gives a vision of a bunch of women dancing in the night (Druidistic?), like thisone a lot

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 4/6/2014 8:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for the nice visit and comment Amy. - your words are encouraging and supportive :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/19/2014 3:56:00 PM
    Oh I really like this. It flows along nicely. I like your phrasing and the way you express yourself.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 1/19/2014 4:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for the nice visit and comment Chris. - your words are encouraging and supportive :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/15/2014 12:18:00 PM
    "A world there is room for everybody to live.." it's a wonderful poem..lovely.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 1/15/2014 12:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for the nice visit and comment Nadarajah. - your words are encouraging and supportive :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/14/2014 7:22:00 AM
    I have a sense there's so much more to this than what you've said in such an enchanting expression. Enjoyed and thanks for welcoming me.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 1/14/2014 7:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for the nice visit and comment Patricia. - your words are encouraging and supportive :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/10/2014 1:24:00 PM
    Awesome!! I love anything about the moon.. Listen to Mr. Moon for Jamiroquai.. xx Sameh

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 1/10/2014 1:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Same - always pleased to receive feedback on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/7/2014 2:42:00 PM
    Very cute poem, I like the images...it has a soft whimsical flow to match

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 1/7/2014 2:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Amanda - always pleased to receive feedback on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/5/2014 2:47:00 PM
    This is delightful! I enjoyed it and the expressions very dreamy :)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 1/5/2014 2:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Fatima - always pleased to receive feedback on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/23/2013 10:40:00 PM
    This poem could be my Xmas wish list!!! Great write!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/24/2013 1:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thank you, Arthur ! - HAPPY CHRISTMAS! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/22/2013 2:34:00 PM
    Hello Anne Lise I have missed conversing with you , I haven't been on for every it seems , I was taking some test/ classes ;} Love Debbie , Merry Christ mass my poet friend xo's Oh did I say this poem is awesome ;}

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/22/2013 2:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely Christmas greeting Debbie. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/22/2013 12:03:00 AM
    awesome... so beautiful <3 thank you deary sista Anne.. :) <3 wishing you happy Sunday <3 much luv and lights <3

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/22/2013 6:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Sukmawati - always pleased to receive feedback on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/21/2013 8:49:00 AM
    this is gorgeous!! I really love it and I can't believe it is one i had somehow overlooked!!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/21/2013 8:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for the nice visit and comments,Andrea - always pleased to receive feedback on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/20/2013 5:51:00 PM
    A very nice poem, there is music and dance in the Title alone "Dancing On The Moon" It feels very good and even hints at a similarity with my own "Alone" and the sly sudden introduction of a serious edge:- "A world there is room for everybody to live A world where no one needs to strive Then the tide can just come" i want that too.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/21/2013 6:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Paddi - always pleased to receive feedback on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/20/2013 5:24:00 PM
    I thoroughly enjoyed the image that you immersed me in. It makes me appreciate the magic of the moon that captivated me as a child once again! Thank you!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/21/2013 6:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Nicole - always pleased to receive feedback on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/20/2013 1:16:00 AM
    A lovely fantasy that carried me away. Will fav this one to read over. Hugs, SuZ

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/20/2013 2:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for the nice visit,fav. and comments SuZ. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/19/2013 10:57:00 AM
    so beautiful the description and sentiments in this piece truly wonderful have a great day friend....xoxo Madelin

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/19/2013 11:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for the nice visit and comments Madelin. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/19/2013 10:22:00 AM
    Whoa, that was good. I need to purchase real estate there!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/19/2013 11:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for the nice visit and comments Marlon. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/17/2013 8:52:00 PM
    Simply stunning. Your descriptions are so serene. Wishing you a joyous season :)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/18/2013 3:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for the nice visit and comments Karen. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/17/2013 5:56:00 PM
    Beautiful!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/17/2013 6:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - A small and simple poetry - :)) - thanks for the nice visit Jennifer. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/17/2013 3:41:00 PM
    this is really lovely, Anne Lise. A good one to see you doing right before Xmas.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/17/2013 3:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thank you for reading my thoughts / words - pleasant with your feedback,Andrea. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/17/2013 9:35:00 AM
    Very beautiful imagination painted with sweet colorful words. Lovely done my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/17/2013 10:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thank you for reading my thoughts / words - pleasant with your feedback, bl my friend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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