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  1. Date: 1/29/2014 5:25:00 PM

    you left no stone unturned, FJ.. fearless, liberating write.. sweet congrats!.. huggs

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 1/29/2014 6:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Nette :) thank you for peeking in on me!
  1. Date: 1/29/2014 9:18:00 AM

    Powerful writing, congratulations.

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 1/29/2014 10:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Richard, thanks. Its been a while since I've been your way so hoping to get there soon :)
  1. Date: 1/29/2014 6:40:00 AM

    Wonderful poem and congrats on the fine win, FJ

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 1/29/2014 10:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hello again Ram :) Thank you kind sir.
  1. Date: 1/29/2014 12:43:00 AM

    I love this F.J - poignant, straightforward and telling. When frustration sets in, it's quite human to project our feelings to other people. I like how you said - find your strength - because the bottom line is if you don't own your problems you will always look to another for a solution. Well penned poem!

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 1/29/2014 10:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Vicky thank you so much; it tends to send some off the wrong way but that only lets me know they do not agree...and that's okay, IF they are not making things worse for themselves and others. Because if they are I could care less if they did not like it ;)
  1. Date: 12/23/2013 11:07:00 PM

    I like this. I like this a lot. It's a very harsh reminder, a very harsh truth. This came out of frustration & disappointment for our humanity. Bring this as a reading to the show in January.

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas Date: 12/24/2013 8:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Drake; I'm glad you see the bottom line of this. So much frustration b/c of so much lost potential :(