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Haiku 104

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Haiku 104

	
	
	
	Haiku 104 
	
	
	her eyes 
	are open yet don’t see 
	night arrives
	
	
	
	
        12.11.2013

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  1. Date: 12/16/2013 3:22:00 PM

    ahhhh, ME LIKES

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 12/16/2013 5:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks you... Jack
  1. Date: 12/13/2013 8:46:00 PM

    Another great Haiku Jack

  1. Date: 12/13/2013 7:36:00 PM

    ut oh dead broad? ;) Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/11/2013 10:52:00 AM

    - Well done Haiku 104, Jack! .......... Who is Karen .... (?) .... Here everything must be told ... lol... - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 12/11/2013 4:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    A friend who committed suicide earlier this week... Jack