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Lonely Heart

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Lonely Heart

I'm sad although it's only been a while
In fact I only left you yesterday
My lonely heart aches with each passing mile

I lay here alone thinking of your smile
On my heart strings your gentle spirit plays
Being away from you is such a trial

For me no other has your unique style
You have beauty that will not go away
It flows endlessly like the river Nile

Of my decisions you're the most worthwhile
The happiest position on my dial
I long to be caressed like potters clay
To Lose myself in your feminine wiles


Dedicated to my Sweetie, I miss you already.

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  1. Date: 2/26/2014 4:09:00 PM
    I think your poem says it all and that your wife is very blessed to have someone who expresses their love through their emotions in poetry...She must be a wonderful person and a lovely wife...God bless you both... :~) Cinda

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 2/26/2014 4:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I am indeed very blessed and yes she is wonderful. Thanks again for your thoughtful words.
  1. Date: 12/20/2013 2:40:00 PM
    you are such a loving husband, Richard..! your wife is so blessed to have you.. :") Hope the "Richard" of my life is same as you.. :))

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 2/26/2014 4:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Sorry I missed this comment. Thanks for your kindness. I personally feel I am the one who is blessed to be with her.
  1. Date: 12/13/2013 8:54:00 PM
    sweet and very beautifully penned richard

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 12/13/2013 8:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Liam.
  1. Date: 12/13/2013 10:00:00 AM
    I know the feeling. I hate being away from my wife. Im sure she just loved this didn't she?!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 12/13/2013 10:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yep she did. Thanks for commenting Caleb.
  1. Date: 12/13/2013 8:42:00 AM
    Good morning Richard....this is so sweet....bet she called right away !!

  1. Date: 12/13/2013 4:12:00 AM
    A lovely lovely dedication!!!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 12/13/2013 6:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Bindu
  1. Date: 12/13/2013 12:27:00 AM
    For the villanelle is always a trial You used wiles and Nile, how creative I like your style YOu used that too, these words are harder there's no denial Dang you even used dial, better not use bile, can't imagine using tile maybe pile or vile, ok these are definitely harder lol

    bunch Avatar wayland bunch
    Date: 12/13/2013 12:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    anyway it didn't save the format, and like I said definitely not offering advice, I really like the poem just like this. Had to break the form recently myself, but someone said in the modern Villanelle it's ok.
  1. Date: 12/13/2013 12:21:00 AM
    Well I definitely can't offer much advice to a poet of your stature. I think you are an absolutely wonderful poet, but I must have a little fun, if any of these key words help, great, I wouldn't change it, but if these don't help and you want more let me know lol. I know you don't need the help, I probably should have soup mailed, but here already. From the person you write about, don't stray If you wanted to rhyme with plays offer that person praise I'm sure just a few words would amaze

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 12/13/2013 7:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You came up with quite a pile there is no denial you are a man with style. Thanks for both the laughs and suggestions, I appreciate your sense of humor. I think you might enjoy the poem I wrote yesterday.. Have a great day Wayland. P.s. the comment you left on Debbie's poem yesterday was hilarious.
  1. Date: 12/12/2013 5:57:00 PM
    Another couple of tercets and it's a villanelle lol, but just like it is, it's a wonderful poem. Great work

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 12/12/2013 10:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes except I ran out of rhymes to work with.
  1. Date: 12/12/2013 9:38:00 AM
    Beautiful and romantic. A love like this cannot be interrupted by distance.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 12/12/2013 10:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I agree, already looking forward to seeing my sweetie in a few days.
  1. Date: 12/12/2013 9:11:00 AM
    Your poem is so beautiful and I am sure that your love will be eternal.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 12/12/2013 10:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Vesna, she is the love of my life.
  1. Date: 12/12/2013 8:48:00 AM
    Sweet dedication and a very nicely written verse. I wish you peace and happiness. I'm sure she will be greatly touched to read it. Always, Laura

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 12/12/2013 10:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes she was very appreciative.
  1. Date: 12/11/2013 5:49:00 PM
    Richard beautiful and moving poem.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 12/11/2013 6:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Joseph.
  1. Date: 12/11/2013 5:16:00 PM
    Richard.....You melted her heart and blew me away with your poem! chuck

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 12/11/2013 6:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Chuck.
  1. Date: 12/11/2013 1:09:00 PM
    this reminds me of the song "By the time I get to Pheonix" by Issac Hays a sad song.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 12/11/2013 6:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Great song.
  1. Date: 12/11/2013 9:19:00 AM
    Very nice Richard, smooth xx

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 12/11/2013 6:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Mandy.
  1. Date: 12/11/2013 8:22:00 AM
    Ah that was beautiful...

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 12/11/2013 6:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Denise.
  1. Date: 12/11/2013 8:20:00 AM
    so cute a poem you have written from yr heart , blessed is she who received this piece .......

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 12/11/2013 6:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I am the blessed one. Thanks for commenting.
  1. Date: 12/11/2013 8:16:00 AM
    Beautiful expressions on romance, Richard

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 12/11/2013 6:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Dr. Ram.
  1. Date: 12/11/2013 8:04:00 AM
    "I long to be caressed like potters clay"- excellent verse, and overall a warm, beautiful, heartfelt poem to your "Sweetie " :)

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 12/11/2013 12:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I have to wait till I get home next week *lol*
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