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  1. Date: 1/23/2014 10:30:00 AM
    Yasmin, I do hope for all this to end. A man's ego will be the death of us all.... Stopping by with smiles.. Linda

  1. Date: 12/25/2013 11:27:00 PM
    hello Yasmin,, I did not want to leave you out of my Happy Jolly Momment.. Sending you a Christmas Carol.... -- Dashing through the snow In a one horse open sleigh O'er the fields we go Laughing all the way Bells on bob tails ring Making spirits bright What fun it is to laugh and sing A sleighing song tonight Oh, jingle bells, jingle bells Jingle all the way Oh, what fun it is to ride In a one horse open sleigh Jingle bells, jingle bells Jingle all the way Oh, what fun it is to ride In a one horse open sleigh HEY! :) <-- You got to love it I do hope you sang with me... Goodnight my friend... LINDA

  1. Date: 12/18/2013 9:10:00 PM
    Congratulations Yasmin! Inspiring write!!

  1. Date: 12/18/2013 9:52:00 AM
    Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!!Sara

  1. Date: 12/16/2013 3:12:00 AM
    - Yasmin, glad I chose to visit this beautiful poem - CONGRATULATIONS! - Hope everything is fine with you. - Big huggs / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 12/15/2013 3:19:00 PM
    Can't argue with the sentiments here Yasmin, I also am most pleased at your high win Joe..)

  1. Date: 12/15/2013 1:36:00 PM
    Nice one Yasim..congrats. BG

  1. Date: 12/15/2013 9:37:00 AM
    Yasmin wonderful write Congrat's!

  1. Date: 12/15/2013 8:26:00 AM
    Congratulations sweetie xx

  1. Date: 12/15/2013 8:11:00 AM
    Sadly the answer is no. Brilliant piece, congratulations.

  1. Date: 12/15/2013 3:38:00 AM
    Yasmin, your wrath is sensible. As people learn more, they forget values and develop ego.One should sacrifice and compromise to promote brotherhood and see the world thrive peacefully.I love this poem.Congratulations.(: ) Jenish Soosai Anthony.

  1. Date: 12/14/2013 8:27:00 PM
    Yasmin beautiful! Wonderfully shared...thank you and Congrats Lady!

  1. Date: 12/14/2013 7:53:00 PM
    Here's my gal a winner again! Congrad's on your win. Happy Holidays. Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/14/2013 7:40:00 PM
    Thanks for your interesting poem and congratulations on the win, Yasmin

  1. Date: 12/14/2013 12:49:00 AM
    Hi, Yasmin. Just came by to say hi. It's getting late and I need to get to bed soon. Have a great weekend, sweet BROWN eyes!!!

  1. Date: 12/12/2013 8:40:00 AM
    Very interesting questions and thoughts within this nicely penned work. Enjoyed reading this morning. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 12/12/2013 3:43:00 AM
    I love this poem, every line is a deep truth, ego has ever been a problem, maybe one day people will get that we are only renting the world while we're here, kind of pointless to fight over it, we are only in possession of our souls. Great Words. D.N.Read

  1. Date: 12/11/2013 3:43:00 PM
    excellent Balassi stanza writing and TOPIC!!! Luv ya!!

  1. Date: 12/11/2013 12:48:00 PM
    as long as there is land and love there will always be war.

  1. Date: 12/11/2013 10:23:00 AM
    Good use of form! It is sad though war is built into us there has never been a time without war. Love YOU!