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  1. Date: 1/29/2014 3:32:00 AM
    I didn't think I'd enjoy this poem because I believe any love that is true is always worthwhile even unrequited love . I was mistaken , The poem is thoroughly enjoyable , Thank you.

    Breidenthal Avatar Laura Breidenthal
    Date: 1/29/2014 6:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Darren, for giving the poem a chance. So glad you enjoyed. I am really looking forward in delving into your world, your work. You have a great rest of the week! ~Laura
  1. Date: 1/27/2014 11:54:00 PM
    If only I could describe how wondrous this is, and how it speaks to me. Beautifully written Madam Breidenthal. :)

    Breidenthal Avatar Laura Breidenthal
    Date: 1/29/2014 6:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Jonathan, thank you. You are so sweet..~Laura
  1. Date: 12/23/2013 10:27:00 PM
    A very deep and soulful piece of poetry. I could feel your pain coming through in every line. You expressed these feelings so well here. Amazing work, Laura!...Thank you so much for the great comments. I really do appreciate it!

  1. Date: 12/20/2013 4:20:00 AM
    I was totally immersed in this poem, Laura. When a line or verse makes me swoon, I know it's a good piece. You made my heart and Soul swoon with your words, and all I can say is fantastic piece :)

  1. Date: 12/17/2013 1:38:00 PM
    It can be easy to expect to much from love, or to even miunderstand and misuse it's quality. This is a beautiful poem of self pity, which all great artists must subscribe to now and then. I like how this write ends with a note of hope and optimism. J.A.B.

  1. Date: 12/17/2013 8:29:00 AM
    Laura...I've been missing a lot as well. This is so so powerful. The choice of words......the images evoked....very real...tangible, almost. Wonderful write. Thank you for all your visits to my work today....You made me smile!

  1. Date: 12/13/2013 7:40:00 AM
    You are a very good poet, very powerful stuff. You may want to change burn to burns in the second last stanza.

  1. Date: 12/11/2013 3:01:00 PM
    Hi Laura! I've been out for a while, but I've had some time lately...gotta tell ya...this one is goin' straight to faves

  1. Date: 12/11/2013 5:27:00 AM
    I saw an old comment that you had left, a wonderful comment, and had to come visit your work. I am glad I did. This is a very moving poem. Great work.

  1. Date: 12/10/2013 2:07:00 AM
    Jeepers! You make me want to cry. Filled with emotion...

  1. Date: 12/9/2013 10:22:00 AM
    Opeth-Windowpane, listen to it. It fits this incredibly well. Another intense roller coaster of emotions...sadness & wanton security, the tracks your words ride on.