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Debonair

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Debonair

As I look beyond my garden, to the blanket on the hills, Where moonlight shines it's magic and where the icy river runs I fold my arms around me in the silver winter's chill, And see a bright star shiver, now that leaden clouds are done I let the night embrace me underneath the midnight sun Each crystal flake, that drifts on down among the river stones A jewel, unique, of other flakes, each gleams as little suns Transforming all, in soft moonlight and glistening as sewn Cotton, fragile, pillow soft, and silk that had been spun Into webs of pearl, the essence curls, so draped and then so clung The trees, and fence posts, dressed in white, so regal and with flair Shimmer in the starlit night, pristine, sewn, stitch by stitch White lace has bordered furrowed rows, of ploughed fields, everywhere My loneliness, and humdrum world, transformed, and much bewitched So debonair, my world so fair, I gasp a breath of air...
________________________________ By Carrie Richards Submitted for the Sweetest Touches of Verse Contest Sponsored by Gauitami Phookan * * * *

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  1. Date: 10/14/2014 7:51:00 AM
    Congrats on a great win...I especially like the first stanza

  1. Date: 10/13/2014 1:09:00 PM
    Beautifully penned work, Carrie! Congrats on your win in my contest,, You are an amazing poet!!! huggs

  1. Date: 10/13/2014 12:25:00 PM
    This is absolutely beautiful Carrie:-) many congrats. Hugs jan xxxx

  1. Date: 10/13/2014 12:19:00 PM
    Carrie your poetry is an absolute treasure. I would like to Congratulate myself for having had the privilege to have read it. Congratulations on your win.

  1. Date: 10/13/2014 11:54:00 AM
    Visiting again to congratulate for another win, Carrie

  1. Date: 10/13/2014 11:51:00 AM
    Congrats on your worthy win Carrie.

  1. Date: 5/27/2014 6:59:00 AM
    Congratulations on the win with this wonderful poem on nature, carrie

  1. Date: 5/26/2014 9:50:00 AM
    Carrie, this is a magnificent beauty.. Congrats on the win!

  1. Date: 5/25/2014 7:11:00 PM
    Carrie quite lovely...congrats on your placement...hugs Tim

  1. Date: 5/25/2014 12:46:00 PM
    nice win..pd

  1. Date: 12/24/2013 12:48:00 AM
    This is truly beautiful Carrie. I love it and it reads so smoothly. Merry Christmas to you. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 12/23/2013 8:16:00 AM
    Carrie, , Congratulations, sending Christmas cheers. .. love Linda <3

  1. Date: 12/23/2013 6:36:00 AM
    very good pen Carrie congrats on HM "season's greetings" Shadow x smile hug

  1. Date: 12/21/2013 3:37:00 PM
    Well, I think this one was the best for me! No cliches or overused rhymes and the usual great meter and imagery! Cheers, Roy

  1. Date: 12/21/2013 9:11:00 AM
    Hi dear, congrats on your Debonair poem. Was up to Ashland a few days ago and thought of you. The mountains were dusted with snow..it was so pretty..cold, but pretty. BG

  1. Date: 12/21/2013 7:42:00 AM
    congrats on your Honorable Mention in the contest Carrie, nicely done

  1. Date: 12/21/2013 1:42:00 AM
    I loved it! It is a beautiful and elegant poem, evident of your style and charisma! Congrats and thank you for it! :) G.

  1. Date: 12/20/2013 2:28:00 AM
    Splendid work..a very beautiful and enjoyable read..

  1. Date: 12/8/2013 9:25:00 AM
    Debonair is the word that describes the author of this beautifully written Quintain Carrie... have a perfect seasonal holiday, Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 12/7/2013 5:38:00 PM
    One beautiful poem this is filled with lovely images, got a peaceful feeling from this one. Flowed beautifully....peter

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