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Around His Happy

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Around His Happy

She bent her light around his happy
A symphonic complicency 
Illuminating their velocity 

He radiated her in semicircular lines
She his rainbow in a night sky
Uncontainable so he let her fly

He flew with her for a time
His notes traveling along her breeze
Harmonizing within those upper keys

He marveled at her lovely
Grasped at the edges of her infinity
Felt blessed by her fluidity

Yet her light travels to fast
His to hold only for a time
Eventually light travels a straight line

The essence of her in moon lit sky
With angel wings she makes her flight
Around his happy she bent her light


Dedicated to Bernard Colasurdo after rereading 
the poem he wrote for his wife titled "A Love Letter"

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  1. Date: 10/23/2014 8:53:00 AM
    Beautiful Richard!!!! "B"

  1. Date: 12/11/2013 11:26:00 PM
    Hello Rick My friend, I am honored and blessed by your beautiful heart. Your words dedicated to the love Maria and I shared has touched my heart deeply. I can visualize your amazing poetry so vividly, I feel like im watching a fairytale. Thank You! Thank You! look for soup mail tomorrow

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 12/12/2013 7:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I'm so glad you have been blessed by these words. Your poem and story has touched me deeply and these words are my hearts response. I look forward to your soup mail.
  1. Date: 12/11/2013 8:02:00 AM
    Great choice of words which you executed and expertly crafted. This was a pleasure to read :)

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 12/11/2013 8:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks so glad you enjoyed it.
  1. Date: 12/5/2013 10:49:00 PM
    Almost like an old song..just beautiful Rick..

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 12/6/2013 8:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Good morning and thanks Donna, hugs Rick.
  1. Date: 12/5/2013 9:49:00 AM
    Tremendous clarity in these lines. The adoration & warmth embedded in this poem are without limits. Very touching lines.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 12/5/2013 10:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Drake! I hope you are enjoying a splendid Califoria day.
  1. Date: 12/5/2013 7:59:00 AM
    This is really light heart read, I'm glad I stopped by to read this gem, have a great day R xxx

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 12/5/2013 8:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You as well Rose, thanks for gracing me with your smile and kind comment.
  1. Date: 12/5/2013 7:52:00 AM
    Celestial.......Ethereal.....Lovely. Loved ones never really leave us. Their memories always light the way for us. Beautiful beautiful poem from you, Richard.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 12/5/2013 8:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Good morning Eileen, Bernard's is a beautiful love story that will one day end and begin with a reunion dance just beyond heavens gate.