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by Gary Player

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  1. Date: 2/4/2014 2:51:00 PM
    I love the poem as always F.J. What would you change to turn a fantasy to truth?

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 2/4/2014 3:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    well....the whole thing lol. I'm afraid the laws of physics do not allow for her abilities. And as much as I'd love to be 5' 6 My 6' 2 husband has to look down to his 5' 3 wife lol.
  1. Date: 12/4/2013 10:33:00 AM
    I really like strong confident women who know who they are and what they are after. WOW.....FJ......You really rocked with this poem. GREAT WRITE. BTW......lovely avatar! :)

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 12/4/2013 10:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :) thanks Eileen! I couldn't pick which one I liked most and had another dozen different one I wanted to add lol...so I just added a few to the actual contest page. But for some reason I feel the one in water displays so many different characteristics to me ;)
  1. Date: 12/3/2013 5:02:00 PM
    A truly wonderful poem you have created her. Loved it....peter

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 12/3/2013 8:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Peter :) It was kind of unexpected.
  1. Date: 12/3/2013 11:33:00 AM
    Every poem you write exudes your self-confidence. Good poem

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 12/3/2013 11:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks PJ; it took a lot of time, pain, and learning to get any for myself.
  1. Date: 12/3/2013 9:04:00 AM
    I absolutely love this poem, WOW! Im faving it, heres tons of 77777s!!!

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 12/3/2013 9:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lol wow Bindu! That is truly a compliment to be placed on your favs list! I had so much more to give her but I had to keep it within the 16 line rule I gave those entering my contest lol.
  1. Date: 12/2/2013 6:25:00 PM
    this is a really nice example for us. I saw it at your contest page too. I hope people truly pay attention and do what you are asking and not use tv characters.

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 12/2/2013 6:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Lol meee tooo Andrea. I'm glad you thought it was a good example.
  1. Date: 12/2/2013 12:01:00 PM
    "I do not respond to a bat signal"...awesome. I'm no hero, but I can help you if you treat me well. Awesome writing! =D

    Thomas Avatar F. J. Thomas
    Date: 12/2/2013 12:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ;) thanks Mr. Eszes! I cannot simply be summoned after all! LOL