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A Childs Aventure

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A Childs Aventure

Racing down the stairs
ready for the day's adventures
in a hurry to get outside
mother making me eat first

I bolt my food as fast as possible
then flee outside and down the road
stopping at Bobby's on the way
his mother telling us behave

Together we head for the woods
right deep into its heart
there a large tree stood
with branches hanging low

We climbed up to our tree house
checked around, then settled down 
would today be the day we thought
eyes fixed fast on a falcon's nest

They should be due to hatch now
a cluster of three eggs in nest
look says Bobbie there is a crack
sure enough he was right

Fascinated we watched the chick hatch
struggling to break free of its shell
wet and sticky looking very bedraggled
to us lads it was the most beautiful sight

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  1. Date: 12/4/2013 3:37:00 AM

    kids really have more options to be natural and be with nature.As grown ups we are used to be proactive and nothing is real.Apart from all these loving and admiring nature is a big skill.Wonderful shadow. A beautiful poem. (: ) Jenish.

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton Date: 12/6/2013 7:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hi Jenish nice of you to stop by glad you like it ty Shadow x smile hug
  1. Date: 12/3/2013 6:39:00 PM

    So sweet Shadow. I enjoyed!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/6/2013 10:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hugs back.
    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton Date: 12/6/2013 7:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    tnx Rick Shadow x smile hug
  1. Date: 12/1/2013 10:50:00 AM

    Love the adventure living within this poem. Nicely penned luv. Hugs and love, Gail

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton Date: 12/1/2013 11:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ty Gail happy that you enjoyed it Shadow x smile hugs
  1. Date: 12/1/2013 10:13:00 AM

    Fun adventurous verse! Shadow! Jimbo

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton Date: 12/1/2013 11:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hi Jimbo it was fun to write ty Shadow x smile hugs
  1. Date: 12/1/2013 9:29:00 AM

    very beautiful piece linda dear friend