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Once there was a man called Frank Benhance,
Believes writing for contest certainly enhances.
Enhance by stunt & gimmick-doubt!
Enhance by magic & trick – doubt!
Bloody, sustainable establishment - Soup poets enhance.  

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  1. Date: 12/2/2013 12:57:00 PM
    GREAT LIMERICK UNDERTAKER AND THANKS FOR VISITING ONE OF MY POEMS RECENTLY. JM

    UNDERTAKER Avatar POET. UNDERTAKER
    Date: 12/3/2013 8:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Joseph.(: ) Jenish.
  1. Date: 12/2/2013 11:25:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading your work today..I am glad that I chose this one ...Sara

    UNDERTAKER Avatar POET. UNDERTAKER
    Date: 12/3/2013 8:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Sara, thank you very much.(: ) Jenish.
  1. Date: 11/30/2013 7:30:00 PM
    Hey there friend, are you mad? well, limericks are HARD and must have a certain meter [There once was a man named Benhance/ whose writing was really enhanced/by gimmicks and stunts/just watch that man punt/he cheats when he has half a chance.] It should sound more like that? Who are we mad at? growling helps me go grrrrrrrr ;) BIG HUGS! Light & Love

    UNDERTAKER Avatar POET. UNDERTAKER
    Date: 12/1/2013 9:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Debbie,I understand.I understand why you are not trying it.If you could write good humor and still abstain from writing.Thank you.My top priority now meter.I'll improve.(: ) Jenish.
  1. Date: 11/30/2013 10:00:00 AM
    Hi Jenish, I like the establishment , and encouragement from this soup bowl. Hoping them contest is a good thing... Sending hugs... LINDA

  1. Date: 11/30/2013 7:45:00 AM
    Jennish, I agree with Andrea--love your Limerick

  1. Date: 11/30/2013 1:07:00 AM
    Hi Jennish. it's good to be back to poetry soup after my little trip for thanksgiving and seeing my friends here. I agree with you. The contests really can enhance our writing!