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Bach

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Bach

A humble name,
Trilling far beyond river
For his music
Flows into the grandest ocean
Leaving land
Aquiver


-Snaperdoodlyay, Laura Breidenthal
-For Giorgio Veneto's Laconic Verse Contest

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  1. Date: 1/27/2014 4:37:00 AM
    Love this one Laura X

  1. Date: 1/23/2014 12:53:00 AM
    Congrats on that great win! Beautiful poem! :) G.

  1. Date: 1/6/2014 11:25:00 AM
    A very physical description Laura, A very original one too! Gotta love that harpsicord. J.A.B.

  1. Date: 12/19/2013 8:43:00 AM
    Love it!! Laura, you are music to my deafness! Merry Christmas, chuck

    Breidenthal Avatar Laura Breidenthal
    Date: 12/19/2013 2:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    This little message made my day : ) Cheers, my friend. And I wish you happiness and content. ~Laura
  1. Date: 12/6/2013 11:13:00 AM
    † Hey Beautiful Laura, I Can Smell The Perfume, Of Your Rose Petals Scent This, Upon The Nap Of Your Beauty's Fragrant Neck: Bite ˜ Smile, Just A Trickle To Taste, Your Poetic Splendour ˜ Emily Dickinson, Marmalade Skies Creamy White, Velvet Clouds Her Light ˜ Happy Holidays ˜ My Love, Always, John

    Breidenthal Avatar Laura Breidenthal
    Date: 12/19/2013 2:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks John. Your comments are always very poetic and uplifting. I hope you are doing well and have a wonderful 2014. ~Laura
  1. Date: 12/3/2013 6:57:00 PM
    great write congratulations on your win

    Breidenthal Avatar Laura Breidenthal
    Date: 12/19/2013 2:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for taking the time to read : ) ~Laura
  1. Date: 12/2/2013 8:43:00 AM
    Dear Laura - Bravo! Bach would be proud while each new generation is aquiver. love, Kathy

    Breidenthal Avatar Laura Breidenthal
    Date: 12/19/2013 2:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I agree (: Thanks a lot. ~Laura
  1. Date: 12/1/2013 7:12:00 AM
    Big congratulations on your super win my dear friend Laura! I love your excellent terse verse. Cheers and hugs! love lots, Leonora

    Breidenthal Avatar Laura Breidenthal
    Date: 12/19/2013 2:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks a lot for the love. Hope you are doing well. :) ~Laura
  1. Date: 11/30/2013 9:45:00 PM
    Laura, if I had to choose my favorites of the number ones I have been reading, I think this is it. I just love this one. It's so beautiful and the topic is a delight.

    Breidenthal Avatar Laura Breidenthal
    Date: 12/19/2013 2:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Andrea. You're very sweet to say that. 8 ) ~Laura
  1. Date: 11/30/2013 6:39:00 PM
    Love the imagery. Congrats, Laura!

    Breidenthal Avatar Laura Breidenthal
    Date: 12/19/2013 2:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks! ~Laura
  1. Date: 11/29/2013 11:38:00 PM
    Hi Laura, Nice write! Ken

    Breidenthal Avatar Laura Breidenthal
    Date: 12/19/2013 2:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Ken. I appreciate it. ~Laura
  1. Date: 11/29/2013 1:51:00 PM
    Great take on the theme Laura, I was just listening to his Violin Concerto #2--Bravo

    Breidenthal Avatar Laura Breidenthal
    Date: 12/19/2013 2:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Sweet - his work fills me with awe. Glad to know someone else who enjoys his music. Thanks for reading. ~Laura
  1. Date: 11/29/2013 5:08:00 AM
    Congrats on the win, Laura

    Breidenthal Avatar Laura Breidenthal
    Date: 12/19/2013 2:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Dr.Ram. :)~Laura
  1. Date: 11/29/2013 4:17:00 AM
    - Like this Laura !!! - Well done, luck in contest !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Breidenthal Avatar Laura Breidenthal
    Date: 12/19/2013 2:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    8 ) Thank you Anne. ~Laura
  1. Date: 11/29/2013 1:25:00 AM
    Very entry with this write, Laura

    Breidenthal Avatar Laura Breidenthal
    Date: 12/19/2013 2:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Glad you enjoyed, Dr. ~Laura