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IN THE MOOD

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IN THE MOOD


lately, i have been in this female mood for some kind of abandon, that which exhales the tigress fire out of my lungs digging the veins from a week's' routine movements pruned to the barest of a payroll’s droll… antiseptic cubicles dictate the rags of chlorine-infected lunch where rooms i strut around have nothing except robotic people, same rye snacks, basins of expired coffee and files of schizoid folio.. just outside, the sky coughs of gas masks rendering a paper bag of humanity to suffocate on clanking bones along claustrophobic subways: such a hemorrhaging day waiting for 5pm to hiss, halt ,and heave… i need to dance with the arms of a jazzy moon fondling my back and whistling the tunes of recklesness when all but the spirit lusts for is just a slice of raw breaths spiraling into tangy punches of rockstar blues... spare me the cranky claws of a friday so sore; i alight like a feline dressed in black lace with cabaret wings, feathers splattered on glitzy cobblestones... voluptuous legs hot and wild sniffing sultry lavender scent of friday night’s parade; and the band notes howl, free like me.
Favorite Poem Of Yours Contest of Giorgio V by nette onclaud

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  1. Date: 12/19/2013 8:13:00 AM

    Congrats on another nice win.....Hugs...Roger

  1. Date: 12/18/2013 10:59:00 PM

    Nette, :) sending smiles.. Congratulations & thanks for supporting my contest. always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 12/8/2013 6:46:00 PM

    Nette, , Congratulations on 'Your own favorite poem contest." I truly miss reading and scanning poems from the winning contest list. Hope you are well! Always & Forever * Linda

  1. Date: 12/5/2013 6:26:00 PM

    Love what Scribe said....manhandle people's emotions with your words...you sure can do a lot that's for sure....awesome and congratulations!

  1. Date: 12/4/2013 2:56:00 AM

    A great one nette. Wonderful. (: ) Jenish.

  1. Date: 12/3/2013 10:13:00 PM

    Wow this is really grrrrrreat Nette!!! I loved it from the very first line "lately I have been in this female mood" mmmmmm that is a great start for anything... sometimes we just need that abandon ... Love it, lady. :)

  1. Date: 12/3/2013 6:07:00 PM

    I think we all have a wild side to us, and some of us are just better at hiding it! But, the claws do come out every now and then! I really love the descriptiveness of this poem, Nette. Excellent work! Congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 12/3/2013 4:18:00 AM

    All I can say is: damn, and faves and plus I love you how you manhandle peoples emotions with words... Some heavy stuff for light poetry!

  1. Date: 12/2/2013 6:00:00 PM

    CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN! A LOVELY POEM .

  1. Date: 12/2/2013 5:03:00 PM

    Loved it nette, I enjoyed the abandon! The last verse is especially good! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/2/2013 3:13:00 PM

    This is truly a masterpiece--I can hear George Gershwin's Rhapsody In Blue in the background--loving it all--FAV

  1. Date: 12/2/2013 10:52:00 AM

    job can really boring and after 5 pm our truly self will rise.. a very good one nette, u sexy feline :) congraattss!!

  1. Date: 12/2/2013 8:06:00 AM

    Congrats on the win, nette

  1. Date: 12/2/2013 6:39:00 AM

    Congratulations Nette on a nice win. A well written poem...Roger

  1. Date: 12/2/2013 5:46:00 AM

    - Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest: - A favorite poem of yours! -by Giorgio V. - A clear favorite poem! - Well done, Nette !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 12/1/2013 11:11:00 AM

    Rooooorrrrrrrrr it out Nette, beautiful one xxxx

  1. Date: 12/1/2013 2:56:00 AM

    Hi, my very dear friend Nette! I'm so so glad to see you won in our dearest friend & dearest sis Linda's contest. What else can i say here? Truly amazing! I myself is hugging it soo much. As the saying goes, many are called but few are chosen ;))) & this poem is really SO great & deserved its win. Big HEARTFELT CONGRATS! By the way, so sad, i can't go home this Dec. Holiday will be on 25th only. Maybe nxt time k? Mc Arthura me after bz days k. TYSM 4 everything! love & many hugs , Leonora

  1. Date: 11/30/2013 9:12:00 PM

    Nette, congrats on your win! This poem ROCKS!! Love it...a fave!! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 11/29/2013 8:16:00 PM

    DAMN! Sultry meets introspection, so love this. I'm sure that PD will love this. Pulls the universal longing of women to the forefront. Hey, hon, I thought I'd tap you on the shoulder, Linda wrote an AMAZING POEM-- please check it out. I know it will touch you. My fast went well. I stuck to it. But by 10 am on the Sunday, Man o man, I was light-headed. All I could think, there are people who don't have a full fridge, security & live like this daily. Hope you're well Your poetry is very healthy;)

    MacMillan Avatar Cyndi MacMillan Date: 11/29/2013 8:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Sorry, I should have given you the title. SHE CAME IN AND CHANGED EVERYTHING, a collaboration with Leonora. Trust me, you will want to read this.
  1. Date: 11/29/2013 6:14:00 PM

    Thank you for bringing me into a poetic world of phraseology that I couldn't even dream of until reading this work. Such a delight.

  1. Date: 11/29/2013 4:32:00 PM

    Hi Nette, A lovely mood indeed! Awesome write.. Ken

  1. Date: 11/29/2013 11:29:00 AM

    Another wow from me. I love how you contrasted the work place with the majestyof the night.

  1. Date: 11/29/2013 5:47:00 AM

    WoW Nette,this is amazing!!Enjoyed very much.

  1. Date: 11/28/2013 11:01:00 PM

    You have always enjoyed the night, you are the mistress of the night, poetess of the moon and stars! I love how you are always looking for Friday, as that is your wild day! Time to have fun on Friday and the week end! I just love your reference to writing as a woman! This is an awesome piece, What a lovely write, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 11/28/2013 6:28:00 PM

    I sincerely hope you found your wild Friday. There are some wonderful lines here, my favorite being, "dance with the arms of a jazzy moon..." Great reading. jack

  1. Date: 11/28/2013 5:27:00 PM

    It is a fatalistic, describing recklessness and carelessness, very well written poem. The excessive usage of adjectives is elitist and stylish, therefore blends nicely with the moods the poem creates. A slight hue or brushstroke of abandonment, is nicely controlled and directed. I liked the poem; I wish the best in PD's contest. :) G.

  1. Date: 11/28/2013 4:13:00 PM

    Nette, a true free spirit ,spoken like a person waiting for Friday, freedom and fun. Love it. Anne

  1. Date: 11/28/2013 4:00:00 PM

    always good to break free from the weekly routine and have some fun...love this one Nette...it speaks volumes! Awesome poem! hugs

  1. Date: 11/28/2013 3:44:00 PM

    Reading your great poem Nette, reminded me how lucky I am to be retired and always living for now. Joyous always. loved your wonderful words...peter

  1. Date: 11/28/2013 12:32:00 PM

    Mercy! Good thing I clicked on this poem today. How often do we really enjoy ourselves and toss caution to the winds? This is one hella of a living-for-the moment poem which speaks of spontaneity on all counts. And the beat goes on! Run free, siren poetess.Unbelievable images!

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