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CONFESSION

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Below is the poem entitled CONFESSION which was written by poet CRYSTAL MAAHI. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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CONFESSION

I SAW YOU SLEEPING THE OTHER DAY,
WITH SO MUCH PEACE ON YOUR FACE.
I WISHED IT WOULD LAST FOR LONG,
BUT THAT VERY MOMENT YOUR PHONE 
RANG SOUNDING LIKE TIRING-TIRING.

I SAW YOU SMILING THE OTHER DAY,
WITH A SPECIAL GLOW ON YOUR FACE.
AND PRAYED TO GOD IN TOTAL AWE,
THAT THE SMILE ON YOUR FACE WOULD LAST FOR LONG.

I SAW YOU TENSED THE OTHER DAY,
AND PRAYED MY TEARS WOULD DRY.
BUT KNEW YOU WERE DOING ALL THIS FOR ME,
SO, JUST THOUGHT ABOUT THAT AND SMILED.

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  1. Date: 12/27/2013 12:54:00 PM
    awee. Mahima, this is a very pleasing poem. A sweet smile, and a very warm caring end. I noticed you have a tiny bit of what I would call alliteration. Maybe one day we can do a Collaboration together. I would love it... xox... LINDA

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    Date: 12/27/2013 1:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I had a very charming Christmas, .. However it is cold, and I miss the SUN.. I posted a Haiku, on Sun Dancing... heheh. Enjoy it when you have the time. I' am looking forward this coming year, in reading more from you. xox..Linda
    MAAHI Avatar CRYSTAL MAAHI
    Date: 12/27/2013 1:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    oh god! thank you sooooooo much it will be an honor to collaborate with you by the way how did your Christmas go!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
  1. Date: 12/19/2013 11:23:00 AM
    so sweet emotions

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    Date: 12/27/2013 1:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you so much for reading my poem