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- Lonely Screams Of Pain -



                 Listen to the silence
                 the silent ... nothing
                 language-independent word

                 Silent screams of pain
                 loneliness that is currently
                 and loneliness luggage tomorrow

                 Slowly creeps into darkness
                 shadows as an eternal companion
                 The total feeling of emptiness, disappointment and sorrow

                 A longing for tenderness, touch and love
                 The butterflies are gone ... they've flown their way
                 Left me here alone - abandoned the covenant of love

                 Tears fall like silent thunder
                 Loneliness and fear behind the mask
                 The mask falls when the tears come

                 The silence of tears and sorrow
                 Swollen, teary and red eyes
                 Trying to catch a ray of angelic light






27.11.2013
A-L  Andresen :)

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  1. Date: 1/22/2014 7:14:00 PM
    I love it!! It was beautifully wrote and touched me as I read it!! Thank you for such beautiful words!! Trish Ann

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 1/23/2014 2:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thank you for reading my thoughts / words - pleasant with your feedback,Trish Ann. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/15/2014 12:57:00 PM
    Thank you Anne for your kind comment. What a beautiful and soul wrenching poem. It certainly tugs at my heart..Such sadness but with deep inner beauty within it. Thanks.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 1/15/2014 1:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thank you for reading my thoughts / words - pleasant with your feedback, Margaret. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/7/2014 12:21:00 AM
    wonderful !

    Panchal Avatar Hitesh Panchal
    Date: 1/7/2014 3:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    pleasure is eternally mine
    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 1/7/2014 2:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for the nice visit and comment Hitesh - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/22/2013 7:04:00 PM
    Powerful write! A soul's lullaby. Very moving Anne...xoxoxo Jon

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/23/2013 3:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thank you for reading my thoughts / words - pleasant with your feedback, Jon. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/15/2013 6:45:00 PM
    Such sadness Anne Lise...such beauty. You yourself are a ray of light madam :)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/16/2013 1:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thank you for reading my thoughts / words - pleasant with your feedback, F.J. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/13/2013 8:16:00 AM
    Oh! very nicely worded the feeling of heart. A great reality of life you adorned excellently, my friend. Loved always, bl

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/13/2013 11:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thank you for reading my thoughts / words - pleasant with your feedback, bl. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/9/2013 5:29:00 PM
    I like this.... sad poem but its reality that things happened the way we do not wanted it to be.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/10/2013 4:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thank you for reading my thoughts / words - pleasant with your feedback, Cecilia. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/6/2013 10:01:00 PM
    OMG, good work! I relate to this poem. It's like you opened my heart and wrote about avery scene you saw in it. High school days...............

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/7/2013 6:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thank you for reading my thoughts / words - pleasant with your feedback, Bongani. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/5/2013 9:54:00 AM
    Your words bleed all over the page Anne, very vivid display of despondency.Blessings Carl

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/5/2013 9:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thank you for taking the time to read and comments my poem .... deeply appreciate your visit, Carl. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/4/2013 2:28:00 AM
    Anne Lisa,such sorrow and pain.who wants people to cry in pain for their contest?(: ) Jenish.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/4/2013 3:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Not for a contest, Jenish. - Thanks for your visit and comments. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/3/2013 12:23:00 PM
    such the lacerated soul. a poignant moment. the pain that fills the void and creates the idea of being alive. well written

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/3/2013 12:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for your visit and comments, Michael. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/2/2013 2:35:00 PM
    It's ironic that the first poem I've read on this site is one of pain, drawn from life's scars.The well that these words come from is deep.Again, thank you for welcoming me.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/2/2013 2:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for your visit and comments, Frederic. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/1/2013 5:45:00 PM
    I can feel it too, Anne Lise....nice write! Jimbo

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/2/2013 4:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for your visit and comments, James. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/1/2013 8:50:00 AM
    terrible pain floods out of this Anne Lise so much hurt making it a strong vibrant write well done Shadow x smile hug

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/1/2013 8:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thank you for taking the time to read and comments my poem .... deeply appreciate your visit, Shadow. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 12/1/2013 7:36:00 AM
    The silence of your poem screams with sadness and pain. One can hope for the butterflies' return.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/1/2013 7:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thank you for taking the time to read and comments my poem .... deeply appreciate your visit, Monterey. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 11/30/2013 3:24:00 PM
    I really enjoyed reading this. It was sorrowful and dark, and captured the feelings of isolation very well.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 11/30/2013 3:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thank you for taking the time to read and comments my poem .... deeply appreciate your visit, Madaline. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 11/30/2013 2:42:00 PM
    Anne Lise, you are an awesome artist using brushstrokes of lonely and hues of sorrow capturing the silence in a poetic Picasso.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 11/30/2013 2:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - That was beautiful stated, Chuck :)) - Thank you for taking the time to read and comments my poem .... deeply appreciate your visit. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 11/30/2013 12:43:00 PM
    aww a sad one, Annekise.. i hope it is not ur true story. if it is, i hope u've done with it. have urself a wonderful weekend dear :)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 11/30/2013 12:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - "Lonely Screams Of Pain" is only a "picture" of pain .... - Thank you for taking the time to read and comments my poem .... deeply appreciate your visit, Dinda. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
    Minardi Avatar Dinda Minardi
    Date: 11/30/2013 12:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I mean Anne Lise :)
  1. Date: 11/28/2013 7:45:00 PM
    Loved this one, welcome to the dark side!! :)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 11/29/2013 3:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - "Lonely Screams Of Pain" is only a "picture" of pain .... - Thank you for taking the time to read and comments my poem .... deeply appreciate your visit, Arthur. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 11/28/2013 7:29:00 PM
    Tears fall like silent thunder is terribly expressive. I've written a few like this, and it is dreadful to experience these emotions. May light soon breakthrough.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 11/29/2013 3:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - "Lonely Screams Of Pain" is only a "picture" of pain .... - Thank you for taking the time to read and comments my poem .... deeply appreciate your visit, Mark. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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