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Haiku 101

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Haiku 101

	
	
	Haiku 101
	
	
	summer’s fragile reeds
	now ice-layered   bend to write
	our names in the snow
	
	
	
	

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  1. Date: 12/11/2013 9:24:00 AM

    sweet and deep haiku... xox...PD

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 12/11/2013 9:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Linda... Jack
  1. Date: 11/30/2013 10:20:00 PM

    yes here is another one, equally good!!

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 11/30/2013 10:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks again... Jack
  1. Date: 11/30/2013 11:48:00 AM

    I hope you had an excellent Thanksgiving Jack. I dropped by to see if you wrote 102.

  1. Date: 11/30/2013 11:28:00 AM

    from summer to winter, names engraved.. terrific 'ju, jack... huggs

  1. Date: 11/29/2013 11:31:00 AM

    I like the feel of this one Jack. Have a great day.

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 11/29/2013 1:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Richard, and you as well... Jack
  1. Date: 11/26/2013 11:39:00 AM

    Ahhh!! This is an excellent one..Enjoyed reading this it today..Sara

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 11/26/2013 12:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for reading it, Sara... Jack
  1. Date: 11/26/2013 10:00:00 AM

    oh I love the picture I have in my mind.. I have seen this... the trees bent low because of the heavy weight of the snow. A beautiful haiku, Jack. Also, I wanted to thank you for your kind comment on my poem Rage... Ironically, I had just posted a poem that relates very well with your comment! :) Hugs

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 11/26/2013 10:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, and you're more than welcome... Jack
  1. Date: 11/26/2013 4:28:00 AM

    - Lovely haiku, Jack! - I want to make snow angels :))) - Have a nice day dear friend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 11/26/2013 9:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Anne-Lise. I too enjoy snow angels, but we rarely have enough snow to make them. When we do it's usually a blizzard. Oh well... This is Oklahoma... Jack
  1. Date: 11/25/2013 5:35:00 PM

    Jack this Haiku tells a very complete story very nice work

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 11/25/2013 6:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Joseph... Jack