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MOONLIT SUITE

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MOONLIT SUITE


Candle of Ishtar glints their eyes to taste
where fireplace burns hushed tones, a smoky glide
and dew anoints waxed mouths, sighs collide,
like unspoken quakes, uttered not in haste.
Lay bare night’s scent, unrelenting, unchaste
peeled garment floats on a lounge of mantle;
there, burst of seeds lodge in her ovule’s well
replayed, released, on nipples’ buds down waist.

Releasing logic, their notes pour as flame
on creamy skin, through dusk-time ever bold
and fingers crawl north to east without shame.
Lovers entwining as one in rush of heat
till  tresses billow like moist sleet, to exclaim
of Ishtar’s ripe tunes; groans of moonlit suite.



~ Petrarchan Sonnet  rhymed abbaabba,
 followed by a 6-line ‘sestet’in cdcdcd

~Charlotte's Scorchers
11/25/2013


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  1. Date: 12/11/2013 9:59:00 AM

    nice one Nette.. Congratulations in "'Charlotte's Scorchers: Erotic/Sensual Poetry''...have a nice one... LUV LINDA

  1. Date: 12/8/2013 4:20:00 PM

    so beautiful, Nette. Congrats for your win.

  1. Date: 12/7/2013 7:42:00 PM

    lovely Nette a fine pen congrats on win Shadow x smile hug

  1. Date: 12/7/2013 7:40:00 PM

    Nette this is beautiful not to mention such a complicated form! Congratulations on a fine win

  1. Date: 12/7/2013 6:44:00 PM

    a glittering starburst of sensual images, nette - congrats on your win in my contest! :)

  1. Date: 12/7/2013 5:50:00 PM

    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/7/2013 5:44:00 PM

    Lovely and very well perceived, your elitist sonnet enchants and allures! Congrats on it and the win! :) G.

  1. Date: 11/29/2013 5:49:00 AM

    Awesome!Some people are asking for cold water below :)

  1. Date: 11/28/2013 8:17:00 AM

    This is indeed a scorcher!

  1. Date: 11/27/2013 6:15:00 PM

    And thus came Nette, with poetry from wet ! And did I mention, the prowling thoughts of your poets here on the Soup ! *smiles* Awesome write dear poet ! Have a blessed night and wonderful morning, ........Much love, james

  1. Date: 11/27/2013 5:54:00 AM

    This is a terrific write!!!

  1. Date: 11/26/2013 7:04:00 PM

    wonderful Nette full of emotion Shadow x smile hug gl in contest

  1. Date: 11/26/2013 4:03:00 PM

    Wow, this is a scorcher indeed... yet done very tastefully... very sensual and lovely, Nette :) Hugs <3

  1. Date: 11/26/2013 3:42:00 PM

    Hi Nette, A most lovely write from you as always.. Ken

  1. Date: 11/26/2013 3:23:00 PM

    A wonderful poem Nette, I enjoyed....peter

  1. Date: 11/26/2013 10:49:00 AM

    Reminds me of a Conan story! Stimulating work here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 11/26/2013 10:07:00 AM

    BTW Thanks Nette for being such a faithful loyal friend of mine! Your kind loving words are always so much appreciated dear friend! Your "Moonlit Suite" is just another example of your wonderful poetic talents! Warm snuggly hugs, my dear Nette! xox

  1. Date: 11/26/2013 8:31:00 AM

    Marvelous as always, Nette. :)

  1. Date: 11/26/2013 7:12:00 AM

    burning beautiful piece dear friend

  1. Date: 11/26/2013 4:46:00 AM

    Gulps! Damnnn; seductive in its movement from unspoken quakes to rush of heat.The attraction, the allure which makes you a poetess of passion without doubt." Lay bare night's scent... what the...whew!

  1. Date: 11/26/2013 1:34:00 AM

    great one nette. Wonderful poem. (: ) Jenish.

  1. Date: 11/25/2013 2:49:00 PM

    wow, awesome. Thanks, Nette - loved the sestet contest (sorry it's so late) x

  1. Date: 11/25/2013 2:39:00 PM

    Passionate work that you have penned..Great effort in such detailed forms..Thanks for the visit to my page.Sara

  1. Date: 11/25/2013 1:30:00 PM

    Hi Nette been away a while but great to back with my friends on the soup, all the best Poetowen

  1. Date: 11/25/2013 11:38:00 AM

    ..... WATER ..... ???? ... No, ice cold champagne in the best quality .... !!! - Of course in crystal glass .... - Hot, hot, hot .... - Beautiful, Nette ! <3 <3 <3 - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/25/2013 10:26:00 AM

    Can I get a fan & a glass of cold water? Cool. Thank you! That "releasing logic" line is the loudest line. Incredible.

  1. Date: 11/25/2013 10:19:00 AM

    "Releasing logic", exactly!. The expansion of being sustained in vibrance invades my senses. Passionate flame done without crossing the line leaves me to imagine more than I can. Ice, please, lady of poetry's desire!

  1. Date: 11/25/2013 10:07:00 AM

    It's not Ishtar although she must have put a spell on this heated night. I must say you are the Godess of Sensuaity and Passion! Flows so well, describing an unstoppable force of attraction and sweet ache elegantly bursting all floral seeds of delight!

  1. Date: 11/25/2013 9:54:00 AM

    a beautiful sensual melody Nette....best wishes

  1. Date: 11/25/2013 9:33:00 AM

    I agree with Russell, the flames are burning red hot in this entire poem. Amazing Nette, keep that magic flowing from your pen. winning wishes. Hugs and love, Gail

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