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Tanka 12

Jack Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail Go to Poets Blog Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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Tanka 12

	
	
	Tanka 12
	
	
	dark skies fuel  
	my melancholy mood 
	winter’s cold rain  
	dampens down my writing mind
	deadens my ways with words
	
	
	
	
	

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  1. Date: 11/24/2013 2:37:00 AM
    very nice tanka, Jack.

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 11/24/2013 11:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Andrea, on this very gloomy day... Jack
  1. Date: 11/23/2013 2:23:00 PM
    Your words seem lively to me! So this is number 12, 88 to go Jack.

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 11/24/2013 11:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    That's a bit daunting, but... Jack
  1. Date: 11/23/2013 7:09:00 AM
    - A touching / sad poem, Jack ..... maybe "Yellow boots sings" will give you a smile (???) - Have a great weekend, Jack! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)